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Very well done, Hope more like this are on the way!

Ja Ne!

More, please!! I loved it!!! I so want to see how the vacation plays out! MORE!!

WooHoo!!!!!! That was great!!!!!! I laughed so hard with all the fun and sarcastic banter going back and forth between the gang. And the white water rafting ride was great. Hiei was too perfect. You have Hiei down perfectly. I don't think that anyone keeps Hiei in character as expertly as you do, and there are a several people who do a damn good job. But you rule!!!!!! I swear, some of the comments just had me rolling on the floor. I had to call my daughter down and read her some of Hiei's dialogue. She was cracking up too. The horse riding trail was fun except for the part when Hiei's horse got killed. How come the poor little horse had to die? Not fair! But, at least, it gave Yusuke and Hiei an excuse to ride together ^_^. I guess I just answered my own question. Aren't I smarrrwwt!!!!

The lemon was so hot, especially when Yusuke was kissing Hiei's neck while on the horse. That is just so sexy. My neck is my weak point, so I can just imagine having Yusuke's hot, sexy lips and hot breath against my neck. Fuck, I'd be sliding off that horse and in need of some new panties ^_^ Hiei's just too lucky.

Once again, you've entertained me exceptionally well. Thank you. Okay, I'm off to get laid now. What great foreplay it is reading one of your fics ^_~ Thanks again.

I'll email you soon. I've been busy getting shit done for my daughter. School starts up again on Monday. The summer just went too fast.

Love and kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver

Wow, Wow, Wow... (after an hour of 'wow'ing) I've said it once and I'll say it again. I adore this fic. You did a very good job Ryu and I'm sure that if Yusuke and Hiei could read the fic, that they'd be trying everything in the fic out.

Again, you have impeccable timing. I have the shittiest of shitty days and then I see this and I love you.

First off - OMG WIN - you took them white water rafting! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...you own.
Second - I agree with KHL, Hiei was spot on, and some of his comments were hilarious.
Third - I enjoyed the story as well as the porn, it was amusing and highly entertaining and you managed to keep everyone in the mix. Well done.

THEN THERE'S THE PORN. WOW. They start on the back of a horse and then you go to my favourite highly-vocal-uke-Hiei. Yay for you (and yay for me). And the Kurama/Shizuru pairing in the background? Awesome.

wow another amazing story