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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luved this chapter. it was funny how she went ga-ga for botan. cant wait to see wat koenma has in store for her since he suggested her to join their side. i wonder wat her answer will be. well until then. :)
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is really, really good! I'm so caught up in it now. Why don't you have more chapters up?! ^.^ Anyway, I loved Glenn's reaction to Botan. I do believe Botan's just unknowingly offered herself up as number 2000! That was just such a funny scene! I'm definitely loving your OC. Update soon!!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So she was one of the announcers at the Dark Tournament, right? I wonder who she was there to assassinate. I haven't seen the end of that arc yet, so I couldn't guess. This is so brilliantly written and I absolutly love how you wove the song lyrics for 'Hero' into the dance. I'm not catching the reference to calling her 'the Logan' though.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I saw this story awhile back then lost it. I'm a little suprised and pleased to see it up again. I suppose you rewrote it to fix any mistakes in it. But, I still love this story and the plot is intresting. This female character Glenn is a delight to read about. I hope you update again soon.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! I LOVE THIS STORY! You need to write faster though! XD
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luved this chapter and the meeting of glenn's mom, thats kind of weird to hav a mother's whose a bat that is short. very short. ok. so cant wait to see wat happens, will the detective team fall for the ploy or will our don juan hav to think of some other plan to get next to kingpin simba. lol. ok enough of my ranting. update asap and get the writing.
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i like your closing statement. be sure to update. and since you love to draw, how about drawing a picture of glenn's mom.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i found this story to be terribly interesting. you are truly a gifted writer. i was very dissappointed that pumba and timon wasnt by simba's side, but i guess i will get over it. this story had my attention from the start. i could actually picture koenma day dreaming while ogre was talking to him. i dont think anybody pays attention to george when he talks. anyway i loved it and i hope you update soon.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Story rocks so far. This Ambrassa*whatever* Flower dude sounds totally wak! lol *can't believe i just said that!* Anyways, UPDATE SOON!!!