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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work, you kept everyone in character ^_^. I liked it and really can't wait for the next chapter ^^. It's an interesting idea and I'm curious to see how this will effect the rest of the tournament...oh man, I'm seeing Karaus looking at Yusuke in a way Kurama won't like hehehe ^_~. Update soon!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course. It had to be Genkai who healed him. And, of course, she gives advice while she does it. It is her way.
You wrote Yusuke's emotions and reactions very well this chapter. I also liked the conversation, and now secret, shared between him and the Masked Fighter.
Update soon!
You wrote Yusuke's emotions and reactions very well this chapter. I also liked the conversation, and now secret, shared between him and the Masked Fighter.
Update soon!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it, but there soooo short, i need more. dont leave me hangin. Anyhoo, your doing a fantabulous job, keep up the good work and update soon .
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oohh this story just keep getting better
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really like that you're using the Younger Genkai/Masked Fighter charcter in this, and using her effectively. Also, I love how nicely you're putting this in the canon, it's hard to do since there isn't alot of time not accounted for in the Tournament, and to do this right, you gotta be creative.
Also, your Hiei/Kuwabara dialgue is right on, so right on it could've come straight from the show.
So more smut in the next chapter? yes? (just kidding, no pressure....although smut is good for the soul).
Also, your Hiei/Kuwabara dialgue is right on, so right on it could've come straight from the show.
So more smut in the next chapter? yes? (just kidding, no pressure....although smut is good for the soul).
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked, please continue ths fic, I want to find out what happens, pleasepleaseplease, update soon if your going to continue thic wonderful fic.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. i've never seen that pairing done before and considering the circumstances i shouldn't like this but i do. oh well. ^__^ nice work. looks like yusuke will be well used before the night is over. i wonder what the conversation outside of the room was about and the thoughts going through karasu's teamates minds. i eagerly await your next update.
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have one teeny tiny problem . . . WHERE'S THE REST?????
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD THAT PAIRING. *^*$$*((_&^%*^%^#%&)(*) Shit...my brain broke.
Really...Karasu raping Yusuke...that takes balls and I love you for it. Even in my demented yaoified mind I've never come up with something like that. YOU RULE.
I need to see more!
Really...Karasu raping Yusuke...that takes balls and I love you for it. Even in my demented yaoified mind I've never come up with something like that. YOU RULE.
I need to see more!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! This does seem rather interesting. Plus, this isn't a pairing that I've normally thought of. Whenever I think of Karasu, Kurama comes to mind, but this thing with Yusuke is working, too. I'm enjoying it. Update soon!