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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you haven't given up on this? I would love to see where you take this. I can't wait to see what you have happen next. Could you let me know when you post a new chapter?
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just wondering...is this story ever going to be finished? I love Yusuke/Hiei and I'm all for a threesome so I really want to know what happens next. Is the continuation posted elsewhere or is there a sequel or what cuz I'm dying to know what happens! Please update or let me know where to find the rest. Thanks!!!
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey i really like this fic. ^_^ i hope you keep writing it is really good.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I was wondering if you were going to continue it. I hope so. I really want to know how it all turns out.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it love, but when will the next chapter be out? I keep hoping to see one
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi, I just realized that I haven't eaten all day (Your fics are too good to stop reading, I say!), so I'm shoveling rice into my face as I type this. Sorry if it's a bit sloppy because of that.
Well, once again, it looks as though it needs to be Beta'd. But frankly, I just don't care anymore. There are some stories that are so good that even spelling and grammar become insignificant. Yours are a fine example. It's a rare thing, when I can read a fic and thoroughly enjoy it, without nitpicking over every single flaw and typo. Sometimes I have to remind myself that this is actually a work of fan-fiction, and not an original chapter or episode that I just happened to have overlooked. You made this one fit with the Dark Tournament line perfectly. It explains what was left out- The gaps of information about what happened between the fights that I thought were just so suspicious. Even if it's not what really happened, I'd prefer to think ot so. Because it just makes sense. A. Why Yusuke is sleeping so much, regardless of how tough his training was. (I found that really amusing, for some reason.) B. Why Hiei was acting so wierd. I mean, come on, he was just acting so completely -off- through out most of that arc. C. Why everyone hated Karasu so very, very much. Besides him being a freak. They'd already dealt with alot of other freaks, but he seemed to strike a cord that made it personal. Or maybe I'm just delusional. Either way, this fic is going in my bookmarks. This time, I think I'll skip the whole "harsh constructive critisism" bit, since I'm too busy admiring the work to actually try and make it better. If it were even possible to make it better, that is.
I'm hoping that this one will have more chapters? I didn't check to see if you'd said it was or not. It just seems a tad unfair to leave it at that, yeah?
*gives Ryu a Kurama-Yusuke-Hiei group hug plushie and runs*
~Nika
Well, once again, it looks as though it needs to be Beta'd. But frankly, I just don't care anymore. There are some stories that are so good that even spelling and grammar become insignificant. Yours are a fine example. It's a rare thing, when I can read a fic and thoroughly enjoy it, without nitpicking over every single flaw and typo. Sometimes I have to remind myself that this is actually a work of fan-fiction, and not an original chapter or episode that I just happened to have overlooked. You made this one fit with the Dark Tournament line perfectly. It explains what was left out- The gaps of information about what happened between the fights that I thought were just so suspicious. Even if it's not what really happened, I'd prefer to think ot so. Because it just makes sense. A. Why Yusuke is sleeping so much, regardless of how tough his training was. (I found that really amusing, for some reason.) B. Why Hiei was acting so wierd. I mean, come on, he was just acting so completely -off- through out most of that arc. C. Why everyone hated Karasu so very, very much. Besides him being a freak. They'd already dealt with alot of other freaks, but he seemed to strike a cord that made it personal. Or maybe I'm just delusional. Either way, this fic is going in my bookmarks. This time, I think I'll skip the whole "harsh constructive critisism" bit, since I'm too busy admiring the work to actually try and make it better. If it were even possible to make it better, that is.
I'm hoping that this one will have more chapters? I didn't check to see if you'd said it was or not. It just seems a tad unfair to leave it at that, yeah?
*gives Ryu a Kurama-Yusuke-Hiei group hug plushie and runs*
~Nika
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please keep it coming this is a great start on an interesting story so far, I love what you have done and I want to see every one elses reaction to what has happen. Please don't quit now.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked, the plot thinks (I think), love the fic so far, when are Hiei and Kurama going to find out what Yusuke did and what will their reactions be, will they hunt Karasu down and kill the bastard like he deserves or will they get really angry but not do anything, or will they be disgusted with Yusuke.... some how I don't think it's the last one, but I could be wrong, after all this is your fic, anyway update soon please.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh! poor yusuke. this is intense... what will kurama and hiei do when they find out what's happened to him? i bet that they will be angry at first... but will take good care of yusuke... and have sweet, loving sex with him! *evil grin* i love this story, it is dark, but funny, too. the characters are very well written and it is so yusuke to sacrifice himself for one of his friends! thank you so much, i am eagerly awaiting more! (so please update soon!) i love you! *glomp* *HUG* *kiss* thanks again!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was so good. I think that Yusuke took the old saying, "Taking one for the team," literally, lol. I just love Karasu fics. He's so evil. Once again you've come up with an original and fresh idea for Karasu fucking someone against their will. So very creative. I wonder what Kurama will have to say when he finds out what Yusuke did. Will he be pissed that Yusuke interferred in his business? Or will he be all over Yusuke, trying to console him, ^_^ ? I can't wait to find out. You better fucking finish this one or I'm going to come after you, lol.