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for Barriers that Shatter

by YaoiGoddess

person Katzztar
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH.... what an ending .... it left me hanging all right.

I'm still curious to what secret Hiei told Botan, my imagination is going wild around ideas of Hiei saying things like he cares for of is attract to Kazuma.

I like the history you gave Botan, it adds an original twist to things. Ditto for having Koenma getting jealous over the scene between Botan and Hiei hahaha
person eve4mem
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sweet and sad at the same time. It's nice to know Kuwabara has a gaurdian kitty.
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* You have finally returned!! I thought you gave up, pushed aside your fan fiction life...plus your Hieibara group on Yahoo is getting spammers ^^; Anyway, you got me hooked hehehe. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more!!! I know since its something from your crazy mind it's going to be very interesting ^_~. So please update soon and happy to see you back in action!! *hugs*
person eve4mem
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see the name LemonKitty in the YYH section. I love your Kuwabara work and this has a great start. I can't wait to see how you're going to arrange Hiei into Kuwabara's life epecially with a daughter. I'll have to keep an eye out for this.
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not my favorite pairing but this sounds like a very good idea for a story. I loved Hiei explaining his reason for helping Kuwabara. I hope to read more.
person Jovianwolfgirl
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, cool a new story. I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read this HieixKuwabara fic.
person kit-kit
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaww i always knew hiei had a sweet side
person Chocolate Milk
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting start... The humans wanted to recuit Kuwa... Demons are after him as well... And Hiei wants Kuwa to stay with him... I can already see that this plot could run very deep... Very deep indeed.

At first when I read 'Why didn't you come to me, or perhaps the Fox... Even Koenma would have something to say about this.' I thought that someone might be abusing him, Yusuke, because Hiei failed to mention him (Don't be angry with me for thinking that, Yusuke/Kuwa is my second favorite pairing, Hiei/Kuwa being my first. I have seen and can picture Yusuke being somewhat abusive to Kuwa, because he can get quite jealous and overly posessive and protective. Also I have wanted to see Hiei get angry at Yusuke for hurting Kuwa.)

I would love for you to continue this, I would read it all and review each chapter (if, of course, I'm not too lazy.) So, if you do decide too continue (and finish, mind you) I would greatly appreciate it... and some Hieibara-ness *wicked smile*