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for Call of The Fox

by kimisan

person swissnights
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are they just going to talk about it or will they do the real thing and have sex???????
person gretel_chan
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have written so far. Well written, nice grasp of the characters, and a very honest portrayal of the insecurities and such involving teenage sex. I look forward to seeing more!
person sukini
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waited...so...long... for a KK fic that portrays Kurama as his scheming self! I could just cry I'm so happy!
I noticed that you write 'suppose' to do something instead of 'supposed' to do something. I can understand why that kind of stuff is hard to pick up because you don't really pronounce the 'd'. Still, stuff like that really gets me, soz!
Can't wait for the next update!
person A.J.
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story. Please write more!!!
person Kim
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww...it just stopped! =D please write more, its a great story!
person crystal_moon13
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..good start...the story is interesting and original so far, can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
person Kathy
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I am interested in reading more. So please keep updating.