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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! This story was great! I really loved it, it was great writing and it was indeed a very interesting story. cant wait for more if there is more lol. either way it was great keep it up! ^_^
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uhh i liked it ^_^ it was good but i had only a couple of problems with it..
one botan was or to me felt to whorey is that a word O_O i dont want to sound mean but she did its like there was no innocence and also i dont get why they never call eachothers name he told her to call him yoko and he asked her her name but yet they never said the names it would have been more uhh ^_^ i dont romantic but thats just me but other than that it was good ^_^
one botan was or to me felt to whorey is that a word O_O i dont want to sound mean but she did its like there was no innocence and also i dont get why they never call eachothers name he told her to call him yoko and he asked her her name but yet they never said the names it would have been more uhh ^_^ i dont romantic but thats just me but other than that it was good ^_^
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O i love this story >.< your my hero! *cries in admiration* ^_^ nice job two thumbs up three if i had one ^_^
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome I hope continue.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your awesome at lemons! I LOVE THIS FIC! MAKE ANOTHER ONE PLEASE!!!!!
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm... Nice. I liked. It was however odd at how Botan went from NO NO I don't want it to... YES YES RIGHT THERE!
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I liked it thought. Keep writing fanfiction. Your pretty good at it.
Crow Rat
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I liked it thought. Keep writing fanfiction. Your pretty good at it.
Crow Rat