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by OutlawLanaya

schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh oh I love it! I would love more but yes I like it I love baby hiei *huggles*
person jem89
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Please write more stories : )
person Dyquem
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. If Hiei wasn't in debt to the Reikai, then many things would be different, and a lot of the evil might have won because hiei frequently tipped the balance, even when he said he wasnt going to bother doing anything, he frequently "saved the day"
person mishap
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll be the first to admit that I don't review near as often as I should, but your story definitely inspired me to do so. It has the aww factor and Hiei is on target character wise. I would love to see a sequel or continuation, even a few vignettes showing Hiei growing up.
person Ox King
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Smiles, I liked it. It was a good short story. Thanks
person Snakutarus
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I would enjoy, very much so, for you to either continue this or write a sequal.
person willowsnap
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so intrested in reading about the changes hiei goes through, please continue this story.
person usagi
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow what a cross over.teheh i wonder what would he be like after the change.hmmmmm so much curiosity. well i guess that means that your a good author now doesnt it. well keep updating please i need to see what will happen