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I've been waiting anxiously for this! :) And I wasn't disappointed! The image I have of Yusuke and Kurama working in the garden is sweet and hot in the same time...I simply can't help but consider it hot when those two are together and kissing or touching is involved :) I love the way you portray Shiori...she really is a great mother and I have to wonder...just how much does she know? :) All in all, I loved it and can't wait for the next one! *sits down and patiently waits for the next chapter*

wow..... i didn't know it was gonna be that amazing...............im totaly speachless...............O_O

I'm horrible and I know it, I should have reviewed again long before now. I shall gracefully accept any and all punishment you so desire to bestow upon me :)

I like how insightful Shiori is, mother's are scary at times with how easily they pick up on some things. And then they just have to bring them up when you least expect it, just to see that total look of surprise, shock or horror(however tormenting of a mood they happen to be in at the moment) on their child's face. I'm off to read ermm chapter three I believe.

All I can say is I envy Kuruma's control at this point. It's definitely what Yusuke needs at the moment but I can't imagine the strain this is also putting on the kitsune. Probably taking many cold showers as a result I imagine. Good chapter, looking forward to reading more. *Leaves a plate of nekkid Hiei cookies* update soon please

Aw, I'll leave you a pretty note! ^_^ I really love this fic, it's totally awsome! I can't wait to see more! Cookies and pocky for you, and yamyams if you update soon! ^_^

awww. *gives you muffins* cheer up, ya? look, other people rewiewed. maybe it's been a busy week for some people, with the school year ending and all. lovely work. i appreciate how yusuke came out and told kurama that he was testing him and how kurama understood. i did the same thing at one point in my life so i totally understand how yusuke is feeling. looking foward to the next chapter, of course.

Aaawww!!Kawaii!!I can't wait for the rest!You're so good at writting angsty YusukexKurama!When i was younger(bah!such an overstatement!!that was like last year) i hated angst...if a story wasn't all fluffy and happy i wouldn't read it.But now i realise angst can be so heart warming!At least all of yours always is!!^^

On Youko:*mwuahahah*Burn baby,burn!!!There was a bit in the anime(the Dark Tournament and then when fighting Shigure) when i really wanted to choke him.He just seemed too different from Kurama and i had a hard time accepting his character.But eh i'm just wierd like that.^^

This is my first review ever on Adultfanfiction, despite the fact that I've been reading fics here for a long time. Sorry about that! Why I don't review is kinda hard to explain, so I won't take up this space with that explanation. :) However, I wanted to tell you that I love this fic and I love your fics, in general! You just have a style that pulls me in... Only I know how many times I'm reading a fic and thinking to myself: 'This is so awesome!', and then I see you're the author and I smile and think: 'Of course it is! It's written by hcoleen!' I know it sounds cheesy, but I swear it's true! Anyway, I can't wait to read more from you and I can't wait for you to continue this! You're turning me into a Kurama/Yusuke fan! :) *thumbs up* Keep it coming!

*is guilty of making the hit count go up, but never leaving pretty notes* I shall be a lurker no more! :p You did a fantastic job on this last chapter. Shiori's attitude makes me happy, and the interaction between the boys makes me feel all warm and squishy inside ^_^ I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work ^_^

I like this... alot... it makes me happy in a way thats hard to discribe. good job.