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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey. i read some of your other stories like "school" and thought that was great and this one is just as great as that. i like how you had the two of them start things off slow for both their sakes and sanity. i cant wait to read more of this since this is one of my favorite pairings. keep up the good writing.
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
glad shiori accpets kurama and yusuke.
ugh atsuko annoys me glad shiori is more of a mother to yusuke than her...and that atsuko is leaving.
hope they can get through their issues and you get to the 'fun' parts lol.
UPDATE SOON!
ugh atsuko annoys me glad shiori is more of a mother to yusuke than her...and that atsuko is leaving.
hope they can get through their issues and you get to the 'fun' parts lol.
UPDATE SOON!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do so love your idea of punishment lol Hmm I like how Yusuke's playing the jealous boyfriend. It's just so, him... Scary though, being faced with the 'mother' talk. Shiori is probably shocking the hell out of the both of them. *Leaves nekkid Hiei cookies* I'm off to read the next chapter!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kurama can be scary when he's angry *nods* oh yes.. The girls I think were rather lucky with how easily they got off. Poor boys though, wanting so much yet so far away from being ready. Awesome chapter, very hot and emotional. Keep up the great work and update soon please.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shall I call you a genius or a tease? ...Maybe both ^-^ Can't wait for the next part!
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KYAA!!!Your most evil cliff hangers!!!*bows*Arigatou for the lovely chapter!!!!Damn it they were that close too!!!Tsk!*kicks Youko*Evil kitsune.Needs to be moles...i mean punished!!!*mwuahaha*Youko may be a sadistic bastard sometimes but he's one molestable morsel!!*yum*^^
Have fun on your vacation and don't let the characters push you around too much!See sometimes you just have to put your foot down and let your Muse know just who the boss is!! :P
Have fun on your vacation and don't let the characters push you around too much!See sometimes you just have to put your foot down and let your Muse know just who the boss is!! :P
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. *gives you cookies* the fuzzy feelings have turned me into a pile of happy goo. i just adore this pairing. have fun on your vacation. be safe (and inspired) when you come back.
~Devious
~Devious
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bakes cookies*Sadly Kurama with his hair up was never drawn in the anime.Or not that i can remember.But it's something i've always wanted to see.*gives you freshly baked cookies for this chapter and Kurama with his hair up*I think i might draw him.I always find your fics so inspiring for my drawings!!^^I love Shiori.I was half expecxting her to go:"Kurama i'm so glad you found the courage to burn Youko.Don't worry in time your powwers will be renewed and you'll grow even stronger." lol!!
I can actually see the look on poor Kurama's face!
I can actually see the look on poor Kurama's face!
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, damn. that was one of the hottest masturbatory (sp?) scenes i've read, and he wasn't really even thinking about doing the poor boy. i can't wait to read more. keep up the beautiful work.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im definately saving this story and printing it. im gonna be asking my friends to read it cuz i think its absolutely a gorgouse story. pls update.