rate_review Reviews

so.. i only haven't been leaving you reviews because either i haven't been around or i haven't been in this section. or i just haven't been online. xD

but i know when you had this one on LJ i was reading this. and i loved it then and i love it now. i think the concept is great. so, maybe a little bit, on the soft side for me, but we all need a few of them to balance out. :P :D and i really did enjoy how their relationship progressed... especially that little tidbit with the fangirls and Yusuke acting possessive. it was most adorable and fun. ^_^

and no matter how many times you write "I love you" ... it has this emotional relationship dynamic that just rings true. which is why i want to go ..but she just wrote it..but i know it has to be there because of how the story goes. it's lovely. and that's why it is just so dynamic. you get to see them grow.

yay for facets! yay for more hCollen fics! *cheeky, happy grin*

cookie or ice cream anyone?

Ah chapter six, how I adore thee. I really like how Shiori is adapting to the situation and the lengths she is willing to go to with helping the both of them. Arsuko on the other hand ticks me off. Granted she doesn't appear much in the anime and I haven't read the manga but I can easily see her acting like this. Genkai gave them sound advice, I think they'd be doing good to follow it *grins* Good chapter.

Chapter seven, I think how they woke up and progressed to making love was exceptionally well done. Yusuke's reaction was very realistic I believe, unsure of himself and what was happening but not wanting to stop either. Kurama was also wonderfully understanding and patient. Excellent work :)

Reviewing chapter eight. Yusuke really is surprising at times, with how giving he can be. It's amusing to see Kurama surprised from time to time and I think the dear detective just did that in abundance. Wonderful chapter.

*chuckles* I wouldn't mind seeing the complete toy collection he's got stuffed in that drawer. Pity the marks don't stay on them, watching peoples reactions could be amusing lol Good chapter :)

shiori ROCKS and AGH TEASERS

“Sounds like everyone is trying to get us into bed together.” -- yes, because the author is a chick obsessed with yu yu yaoi -smiles-

YAY FINALLY STUFFS GONNA HAPPEN! the tension hath been killing me

omfg GENKAI IS SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i even have my popcorn! lol

sexAY made me tinglAY

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww YAY

Review, Chapters 1-3:

I'm here! I'm, um, slow, but I'm here! I really like this so far, how Yusuke and Kurama are actually courting (for some reason, that sounds like a *really* old-fashioned term. What do you think?) and working up to the carnal part rather than just flinging off their clothes and going for it. That's a change from some of your other stuff, which makes me wonder, looking at the other stuff, what sort of role Hiei will have to play in this story, if he has one at all. Hm . . . Well, only one way to solve that question, and that's by reading further! ^__^