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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, so me being the crazy person that I am forgot to put my name for that last review I wrote since I didn't sign in. So, just so you know, that Anon review is from moi. Update soon! ^^
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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do SO love your muse -- especially when she takes you in a direction such as the one taken in this story. I can picture Kurama saying 'yes' to Karasu but ONLY to protect another, as he was doing here!!
And as always, the sex was divine, though done for purely 'medicinal' purposes :). You even left us with a VERY significant cliffhanger, so I am really anxious to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
Once again, crisp narrative and deftly written characters combine for a great, great story!! BRAVA!!
And as always, the sex was divine, though done for purely 'medicinal' purposes :). You even left us with a VERY significant cliffhanger, so I am really anxious to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
Once again, crisp narrative and deftly written characters combine for a great, great story!! BRAVA!!
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love you and your muse! This was very, very well done. I was completely surprised to see Yusuke and Hiei arrive but oh so very pleased. Gotta love the way Hiei took charge of the situation as well as Yusuke's reluctance at what was going to happen even though he knew it needed to be done. Can't wait to see how he gets over those issues. Awesome chapter, update soon please.
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Another one,and this one is as good as the others.No one writes my fav threesome the way you do. Looking forward to your next effort. Can hardly wait.
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I especially liked the way that Hiei burned Karasu's body. Can't wait to see what Genkai says so I shall be eagerly awaiting th enext chapter.
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Collie, you scare me... But the story rocks! I'm glad I got to be half a muse for this story... ^_^
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story definitely lived up to expectation. I LOVED the Kurama/Karasu parts. If I could, I would definitely give you a plushie for that. You wrote Karasu's insane tendencies and wishes very well. And though the ending of this fight was the same as the DT, it still turned out very well.Then, how you had Hiei and Yusuke give him their sexual energy...that was just great! It kind of bothered me, though - Kurama's lack of response. It seemed so close to necrophilia that it freaked me out a bit. But it turned out great! Though now I'm wondering what it is that's "getting stronger" in Kurama's back? Is it poison from Karasu's nails? Update soon!