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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I like Hiei and Yusuke working throught there feelings. Update soon.
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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*passes out torches and pitchforks* ^_^ C'mon Colleen, get the next chapter up soon or else.
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that is an evil place to leave off LOL I can't help but think you need spanked for that *grins* I particularly liked the shower scene. I had to reread it four damned times just to comtinually enjoy the mental image of Hiei in the shower and touching himself. Very good on the emotional aspect as well, at least Hiei now understands why Yusuke is so insistant on liking him. Now I shall sit here on the edge of my seat.. watching.. waiting.. anticipating... the next chapter. *Holds out plate of naked Hiei cookies to tempt your muses* Update soon please?
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope this review goes through. I've only tried to review this story like ten times! Anyway, Wow! Karasu's such an evil bastard. I like the twist with Karasu's ki still attacking Kurama. I also like Yusuke's innocence and uncertainty regarding the whole relationship thing. My sweet Yusuke wants so badly, but he wants to be liked and/or loved too. That's so Yusuke. I never did take Yusuke for someone who would just sleep around for the sake of sex. Looking forward to the next chapter, princess.
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have inspired my muses. i do not know how but you this chapter has and for that I am grateful.
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your gay muse really went against you this time, didn't he? Not only is it not a one-shot, but you're going to have more than two chapters! Yes!! No one but you is complaining, so you'll be okay. ^_^
This chapter was really good. At the end where you had Kurama fighting off Karasu's ki was great! You wrote it like he was in a real battle which made it much easier to understand, I'm sure. Also, all the tension between Hiei and Yusuke really kept me pulled in. It was almost amusing how they reacted to each other, especially Yusuke with how innocent he is in these matters. Great job and update soon!
This chapter was really good. At the end where you had Kurama fighting off Karasu's ki was great! You wrote it like he was in a real battle which made it much easier to understand, I'm sure. Also, all the tension between Hiei and Yusuke really kept me pulled in. It was almost amusing how they reacted to each other, especially Yusuke with how innocent he is in these matters. Great job and update soon!
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I won't kill you! :) Actually, I think it was a perfect place to end... it just leaves so much more for me to look forward to in the next chapter.... wink.... wink...!
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsm fic, but you're such a damn tease :/.... i thought there would be some karasu/kurama action..... anywhoo i still think its awsm
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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As usual another exellent story. Please don't make Yusuke have to choose, I love them as a threesome. Update soon.
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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh. No matter how hard you try, you just can't stay away from the OT3, can you? Poor Yusuke, he really didn't put in for THAT when he showed up to rescue Kurama.
Of course, Kurama + Karasu = psychotic demeted love, and I enjoyed every minute of that scene. Karasu with the traveling ki is quite unique, I need to get one of those. But the whole Yusuke and Hiei showing up at the end thing really surprised me, as well as the fact that it ended up being more than one chapter.
The marks on Kurama's back though...those worry me. There's going to be problems.
Of course, Kurama + Karasu = psychotic demeted love, and I enjoyed every minute of that scene. Karasu with the traveling ki is quite unique, I need to get one of those. But the whole Yusuke and Hiei showing up at the end thing really surprised me, as well as the fact that it ended up being more than one chapter.
The marks on Kurama's back though...those worry me. There's going to be problems.