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for Lust, Love, and Fornication

by livingdeadgirl137

person setosgirl (not signed in)
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for uke Hiei! This is nicely realistic and in character, as opposed to some stories. ^^ Please post chapter three!

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SG
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh. You portray Hiei and Kurama's connection wonderfully. I like how you decsribed Hiei's facial expression and how Kurama thought it made him look innocent and childlike. Hiei offering to stay made me smile, and Shiori needs to leave Kurama alone when he's taking a bath.

**Bribes with cookies** So, um yeah, chapter 3...?
person Stacy
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love the first chapter!! So please continue with the story. I'll be checking back everyday!!

Your fan,
Stacy
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked author, teasing us with a possible lemon then cutting off before it got too good. Update soon.
person HeistChick(notloggedin)
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy... -stares. coughs, blinks, grins- Right, reviewing here instead of a little on the first chap and a little here. Loving all of it so far; Want the sex want the Yusuke/kuwabara bit get on it! -cackles, holds onto- I love you, koi o.o' Keep up the awesome writing and eventually I'll be adding to mine.. given Aff.net is.. cooperative.. Unlike our chibi ichi.. -cackles again and snuggles- Woo >>' See ya thursday o.o and later t'night