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by mhmartini

person Anon
schedule May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha funny...wery misleading.
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahahahahaha...You whore! That was so funny I almost peed on myself. (You know, I was like that in school too, if it wasn't a A, then I did something wrong - that's probably why I find this terribly amusing).

And I'm the first to review! Yea!

You know, you should try your hand more at the ficlet, you do it well.
person NyteKit (not logged in)
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! Oh my goodness! That was just so wrong yet so funny! Haha, great job on that one. If that wasn't good for a laugh I don't know what was. Nice job! ^^
person Niiro
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You got me! That was hilarious!! Nice!
person thoth_moon
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh . . . You Magnificent Bastard. I was completely thinking of something else- and I suppose that that was what you expected, huh?