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by mhmartini

person ruthie balboa
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a funny little story that I enjoy. It's silly and reminds me of a dear friend who reacted the same way, except it was a B, not a B+.
person KAren
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was funny and definitely not what i was expecting
LOLZ
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! XD *dies laughing* That was AWESOME!!! I love it!!! :D
person kurochan
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dat was soooo cute!!!

It was almost too cute!
person Rei
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. After sulking for a bit on how perverted my mind is I read it again. Short but sweet. You've got talent for leading people on.
person zekesbabe
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say...I certainly wasn't expecting that...HOW THE HELL CAN HIEI NOT KNOW WHAT A B-PLUS IS?! I mean...it's so obvious! Surely demons had some sort of grading (asides their demon status)!

Gotcha right back!

Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
person Kawaii-Keke-Chan
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so short.
But very funny! :P
person AnnaJaganshi
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO That was freakin' hilarious! I thought... it was something else. A B+ isn't that bad. But he isn't used to it so I guess it's a heart breaker. Great job though!
person jonez
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Merely wanted to say how much I loved this.
It's absolutely adorable.
*^_^*
person bob
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol that was cute