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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story...I'm very much enjoying it...keep up the good work.
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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good ending. I'm glad Hiei got to experience the pleasure not just the madness.
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May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm . . . violent material . . .
Hiei's horror at a violent act he had committed contrasts a lot with how indifferent or downright ecstatic he can get when killing people, but then again, those were never friends or lovers. So I liked the change.
And that little joke with Shiori at the end, I liked ^__^ Reminds me of something I'm slipping in Jagamino.
Shall be looking for those possible one-shots in the future, rest assured.
Hiei's horror at a violent act he had committed contrasts a lot with how indifferent or downright ecstatic he can get when killing people, but then again, those were never friends or lovers. So I liked the change.
And that little joke with Shiori at the end, I liked ^__^ Reminds me of something I'm slipping in Jagamino.
Shall be looking for those possible one-shots in the future, rest assured.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are, without a doubt, the absolutel Queen of Beautiful, Sensuous Love Scenes!! I know that I've said this before, and it's been proven here yet again, but you have SUCH a way with the vocabulary you choose when writing a sex scene -- that one can't help but visualize it in all its beauty and eroticism. BRAVA, my dear, BRAVA!!
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAA! (Means I am immensly grateful for the second part of Switching)
Haunting flashbacks, beautiful lemon, I love it so, and a lot of your other works. Awesome job =D
Haunting flashbacks, beautiful lemon, I love it so, and a lot of your other works. Awesome job =D
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You finished it...?
I thought it was a little fast, considering your other long fics, but it's quite apparent that this isn't like the others in you timeline. XD I changed my mind: I am glad you didn't let Shiori find out about the whole "dominant-demon" thing. She probably would have flipped and forbade Hiei from seeing Kurama again. Maybe...
Anyway...
I liked the descriptions of Hiei's visions, no matter how macabre they were, as well as his sudden breakdown. You write BEAUTIFUL love scenes, you know. Don't stop. Especially not with any lovely uke!Hiei you have around. Good job!
I thought it was a little fast, considering your other long fics, but it's quite apparent that this isn't like the others in you timeline. XD I changed my mind: I am glad you didn't let Shiori find out about the whole "dominant-demon" thing. She probably would have flipped and forbade Hiei from seeing Kurama again. Maybe...
Anyway...
I liked the descriptions of Hiei's visions, no matter how macabre they were, as well as his sudden breakdown. You write BEAUTIFUL love scenes, you know. Don't stop. Especially not with any lovely uke!Hiei you have around. Good job!
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see a continuation of this story - how Hiei helps Kurama heal, Shiori's reaction to it or something of the like.
It's certainly darker than the other parts of your stories, mostly because it's seme!Hiei who is doing to abuse to uke!Kurama (and I don't really go for abusive-seme!Hiei). I understand that you don't approve of rape and I definately agree, but the it does fit, and I see your point about dirty demonic sex. Most of the stories I read and write have the most perfect love scenes. ^_^;;
Please update soon! Can't wait to see wait happens!
- morgan
It's certainly darker than the other parts of your stories, mostly because it's seme!Hiei who is doing to abuse to uke!Kurama (and I don't really go for abusive-seme!Hiei). I understand that you don't approve of rape and I definately agree, but the it does fit, and I see your point about dirty demonic sex. Most of the stories I read and write have the most perfect love scenes. ^_^;;
Please update soon! Can't wait to see wait happens!
- morgan
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully completed. This was magnifcently sensitive and sensual. It was simply amazing. Very well done. *bows to you*
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was nice! This chapter made up for all the pain our poor demons suffered in chapter 1. I like how this turned out and how it fit in the timeline of all your other stories. Short and cute! Great job! ^^
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Isn't it great to have a home again? I almost passed out last night when I checked and the entire archive had been reinstated...then I almost passed out again when I saw that you added the 2nd part to this!
Hiei remembering the night in flashes as he touched Kurama, and then seeing the visual proof of those memories was done incredibly well. I liked that you had him remember, and I LOVED how you explained the Majin form and why he chose not to use that form once he gained a bit of power and control - someone needs to fill in the YYH gaps and there are plenty of them in the canon.
Of course, you write an amazing lemon. For some reason, you manage to write a hawt scene between our favourite demons without being overly vulgar or filthy - and I don't want to say it's fluffy either - you just have this way about your writing that makes the whole thing seem...real...if I'm making any sense. Am I? I doubt it.
Besides, being overly vulgar and filthy is my job... :)
I cracked up when you said that Hiei eats a great amount in one sitting - I totally see him doing that!
Great story, all in all, gotta love the Kurama torture AND the lemon. You rule again!
Hiei remembering the night in flashes as he touched Kurama, and then seeing the visual proof of those memories was done incredibly well. I liked that you had him remember, and I LOVED how you explained the Majin form and why he chose not to use that form once he gained a bit of power and control - someone needs to fill in the YYH gaps and there are plenty of them in the canon.
Of course, you write an amazing lemon. For some reason, you manage to write a hawt scene between our favourite demons without being overly vulgar or filthy - and I don't want to say it's fluffy either - you just have this way about your writing that makes the whole thing seem...real...if I'm making any sense. Am I? I doubt it.
Besides, being overly vulgar and filthy is my job... :)
I cracked up when you said that Hiei eats a great amount in one sitting - I totally see him doing that!
Great story, all in all, gotta love the Kurama torture AND the lemon. You rule again!