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sniff, sniff, sooooooooo saaad, I think I need a kleenex ;)

oohh wow another amazing chapter

Wrong... Yusuke was 17 at the end of yyh and Kurama was the 19 year old. yusuke and kuwa were both 14 and kurama was 16. the anime ran the span of three years, so yusuke ended up 17 and kurama was 19 hence why kuwa was studying for college, they were in highschool and kurama WAS in college.

Sorry to say this whoever the anon person is who thinks Yusuke is 17 at the end, yes Yusuke was 14 when he died however, the dark tournament saga started six months after taguro faked his death which was after the long months of training with Genkai that so, that means that he was fifteen when he left for the Makai with Hokushin, Seitei and To'o and 18 when he returned. so i bumped it up a bit to make it fit my story and make Yusuke legal to drink with in a few months. and yea, i do say i just over looked that Kuwa was going into highschool, that was an opps on my part.

yay you updated. im so happy now. i have been waiting forever to read the next installment. poor yusuke, he tries so hard to give keiko what she wants and she just throws it in his face. i hope when they go on this vacation that nothing goes wrong, i.e. yusuke finding out jin is preggy and keiko overhears. ok enough ranting, cant wait to read more. and welcome back. : )

i guess accidents happen but man if my grandfather broke my computer i would have a break down.

Added this story on my to my favorites (bookmarked it) so I can keep an eye on it. ^^ This is the first Yusuke/Jin, Jin/Yusuke fic that I've read and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. ^o^ Anyway I hope to read more of it, though I know how demanding life can be and how vicious writer's block is. >>; So no rush hun, take your time to get these chaps out. *huggles*

I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!!! I HOPE YUSUKE AND JIN GET BACK TOGETHER REAL SOON!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!

So far I havfe only read like a few paragraphs.. oit seems good but I must tell you, please learn to space it better, the paragraphs are all way too lined together and its really hard on someones eyes.

*Chants 'tell me what happens' over and over again*