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person steph8503
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you fuck bitch you love ending chapters like that do't you. but anyways please write more soon.plese and thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!()()
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person kit-kit
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was amazing im happy that keiko and yusuke aren't togerther
person K
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOPS-CHAN!!!!!!!!!! No you cant leave it like this, I must know what happens in the one on FF.net and this one. Poor little Oops-chan, :( :( :(. PLEASE UP-DATE SOON!!!!
person Wilder
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GRR!!! I mean you just left us hanging. he's in labor and yusuke is no where to be seen. why must they kidnap him?? you know what would be awesome? Gin and yusuke's kid totally blasts everyone but Gin with ki or something... they must survive!! gin and yusuke are a great pair in this fic... and keiko must die, hiss!! please update soon, the insanity of possibilities is closing in!!!
person angelbaby
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaawwww don't let the baby die! Sniff sniff, I guess you could keep Jin around too I kinda like him he's funny. And where the hell is Yusuke? That bum! Anywho keep writeing it's just getting good. ;)
person kit-kit
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
person cat
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You evil person. Finish that cliffhanger this minute. You CAN'T let them both die. & not little Urameshi either!! If you were going for angst I suppose you could kill off Jin and leave Yusuke to raise his child. I'm of the opinion he will "hear" Jin all the way in ningenkai and go racing to the rescue. But he might not get there in time.
person FluffyFox
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this soon!!! Please, please, please...Jin/Yusuke are my fav pairing!!!

Ja Ne!
person kit-kit
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter
person eirian
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I hope you update it soon, because the whole thing fascinates me.