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person kit-kit
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
person Kerbear
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling that the Shinobi don't know whats about to hit them.Yusuke very angry is never a good thing.This is a great story and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHHHHOOOOOOOOO! I AM SO FREAKIN' HAPPY TO SEE THIS UPDATED *starts to dance around* I MEAN WOW. ok enough with the caps lock....i luvd this chapter, it was so waff and yet it wasnt. yusuke i luv him thats all i can say and to see him that deovted to finding his and jin's child plus ready to kick anyone's ass just luv him. cant wait to read more so update soon and thanks for the shout out. i owe you one. btw yusuke and rawks! whoo!
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I want to say that I hope you are alright and that I hope that everything gets back to normal. I don't want to seen like I'm giving you sympathy, simply sending "happy vibes" towards you. Secondly, I love your story!! I have read your other ending, but it just wasn't satisfing. Hoping you finish soon!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually like male pregnancy stories, nor do I usually like Jin Yusuke for that matter, but I love this story. I've read it twice now, for some reason I just really like it. Please post the next chapter soon!! *cries*
person angelbaby22
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sniff,sniff. I'm sorry about your grandma :( I hope you feel better and chear up soon. And God Bless
person Mew
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok honestly, you need to just go ahead and end it and stop with the damn cliff hangers after taking several years to update. The story is good dont get me wrong but really drawig it out like this is just getting annoying and making people not want to evern bother instead be in anticipation. Please just go ahead and drop the cliffies already.
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Raizen R-A-I-Z-E-N Not rizen.... but its a good story none the less, maybe less cliff hangers?
person WalkingContradiction
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear about the crap you've been going through, but don't cut out the cliffhangers. It's not a good story without them. If people can't handle cliffhangers, then they can't handle the content of these stories, so they should grow the eff up.
person kit-kit
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn yusuke lost his baby i feel sorry for the bitch who took his baby because yusuke is going to be mad when he finds her.