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person kitkit
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter, im glad oops is back with yusuke and jin
person 66Hiei08
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the long-awaited update! I'm very much into this story. Chapter 10 needs fixed, though. But keep up the good work!
person kerbear
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was great.Yusuke a daddy and lovin it,JIn seems to finally feel like he is home.Yet with the
shanobi still out there there can't be to much time to relax and I can't wait to see how jin reacts to Kakio(sp?)After all he must protect his man from the big mean human.lol,Plus Hiei was a great big help Kurama has to thank him properly.Can't wait for the next chapter and am really hoping it isn't as long a wait as this one.
Great job
person Kay Cunningham
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I can't wait 2 see wat happens next please update soon.
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again you did a wonderful job on the chapter. I saw a couple of typos, so you might want to get a beta, even though I am totally not one to talk when it comes to typos. I think everyone is still written in character (which I can be anal about at times), and in a story like this, I know how difficult that can be. Thank you so much for putting up another chapter, all though please, please don't make me wait that long again! I really, really like this fic, so post whenever you get the chance!
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I've never seen a Jin/Yusuke pairing. Please update soon.
person kitkit
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP this chapter was freakin awesome and i must say now i hav to get my next chapter up lol. this was pact with emotions and i was just lik no jin dont give up and yusuke find them and slaughtered them. man this is getting good and the lemon bout time lol ^^. cant wait for the next update and yes i will be on ur case for that one too ^_^
person kerbear
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so thrilled to see another chapter on this story,I was really hoping you hadn't given up on it.
Its great to see Yusuke and Jin together,its not a pair I'd think of right off but it really works.I can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon.
Great job
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, I absolutly love it.
Post a new chap soon.
...please?