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for Eye of the Beholder

by KyoHana

schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. One of the best I've read. Please update soon.
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I ever read past chapter two of this one in the past. I have no idea why I didn't; I'm absolutely enchanted. Somehow you've found my two favorite things (okay, I'm counting Hiei and Kurama as ONE thing, and the setting as the other) and combined them perfectly. Your style of writing is also perfect for the setting. Your word choice fits the story wonderfully.

I do hope your muse decides to inspire the next chapter soon; I'm kind of dying to see what happens next.
person 66Hiei08
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I'm finding this to be a very nice, well-worded twist on the beautiful story of "Beauty and the Beast". Although I've been known to "torture" the little guy in some of my writings I hardly consider him a beast, but it works for this story, lol. It wouldeth pleaseth me if thou wouldst but update soonest. I thank thee. :o)
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd forgotten about this story. I'm glad you updated. As expected the beast seems to be taken with the beautiful Kurama. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I NEED another chapter!!! Oh this is so good, I am wiggling in my chair with excitedment! ....wait... -_- That didn't sound right. But STILL!!! More please and thank you.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And in exchange, you will agree to remain here – as my companion – for the remainder of your natural life.

*Jumps on Hiei* OK, I'M IN!

I love the way you're writing this, it's like old school fable with a fantasy twist, everything from the pattern of speech to the setting flows with it. Wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next, Hiei doesn't know what he's in for.
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another masterpiece!!!! Wow please, oh please update this one too soon? Please?
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know...I bet Hatanaka is going to have to make some kind fo deal for defiling that rose bush...like giving our little black-cloaked figure (Hiei) his stepson.

I love period pieces. I used to read fantasy all the time and this AU makes me feel like I'm coming home.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I can't wait for this to move along though and have Kurama meet his beast. Update soon.
person NyteKit
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, an update! Not altogether too interesting, but undoubtedly necessary to move the story along, so I won't complain. Update quickly.