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wow, i like this chapter alot. thanks for updating. but wait, im kinda confuse, is yuusuke pregnant? or is it kurama? it had grea irony but i actually though they had decided to have an secret realtionship behind keiko. when he called kurama, i though they were gonna have sex, but still wonderful. pls update soon.

the fics were very long, it would have been more appriciated if you made the story line abit faster as well as the settings that way your writting would have not been a waste. but wow, im very very impress:) good writting skills and i like how you portray them. very good job!! what was funny was before i reviewed it said "review as we lay" lol, but anyways, pls update.

hot i think i like where this story is going

That was a very nice story. Wonderful use of imagery in there. It's definitely one of the best uses of it in a fanfic that I've read. And you not using any names just made it better. And though you didn't use names, it was somehow easy to tell which 'he' you were talking about. Great job!! I really enjoyed this one! Also, nice song choice to use. I heart that song, too!

i love your fic....*smiles* keep writing.....i get fuel from fics, and i LOVE mpreg for some reason....somthing about a preggie guy thats just HOTT....*smiles evily* wish i could write like you....