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I read this on ff.net last night, and then I come here to find that there is a PROLOGUE which is drenched in hotness, so I did a little dance.

This is an amazingly well-written story. You have a terrific grasp on voicing the psychological struggles that go on in the character's minds, and those struggles are very hard to put into words, but you did so wonderfully and effortlessly. I could not only feel what the characters were feeling, but you also had a way of writing it that made it feel like it was almost happeneing to me.

The erotic scenes are written in such a delicious manner - heated, but not vulgar. Beautiful. The way you portrayed Hiei and Kurama's relationship is the way i've always seen it - they are not bound by conventional morals, therefore they wouldn't have the same problems as Yusuke and Keiko.

Kurama's actions and words toward Keiko during the last chapter were wonderfully in-character *applause*, I loved how Kurama let Keiko know that he would hit her back if she raised a hand to him.

I'm glad to see you're back! With aff being down, I was worried that I'd never see some authors again!

Wow another great chapter poor Hiei, Keiko (you bitch!) and Kurama "If I wanted him I would have had him(?)" Damn I love it more more more.

that chapter frickin' rocked my socks. especially when kurama got to the part of telling keiko that yusuke knew that he wasn't biki's daddy. great stuff. please tell me that there's more. this story is definitely going in my green yaoi book of shame as one of my faves. i'll be keeeping an eye out for the next update.

~Devious

oohh wow the chapter was great and you surprised me with biki not being yusuke. i should have known the girl wasn't his with toushin only being able to make male kids. though now i wonder how kurama is going to make yusuke his

wow......*jumps up and down* me likey me likey..... keep writing

The beginning kinda dragged. I rolled my eyes so much I thought they were gonna slide right outta my head! It picked up around the middle of the 2nd chapter. The fourth was really good. I made a mental list of possible outcomes and you picked A. Good choice. I hope you're not finished though.

This is writing at its best here. I'm loving every second of this fic. You have, so, picked up a fan for life. This is my favorite yuyu pairing and of course it has been written before but not quite like this. That first chapter left me stunned and second had me hooked. Needless to say that I'll be back for more. I HAVE to see how this plays out.

I really don't want yusuke to abort. I feel that the loss would wound yusuke's chance at happiness with kurama. Not to mention he probably regret it until the day he died. So until next time, ja!

OMG, you have got to hurry an update, pa-lease. You can not just leave me hangin like this. Please update as soon as possible. I HAVE to know whats gonna happen next...although I can guess but Id rather read it. Anyhoo, keep up the good work and update soon.

TaTa

I love this please update I rather H/K but this is great poor Yusuke! Update Update!

nnnoo i don't want yusuke to get rid of the babies