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Heh. I thought that the story was completed for some reason, but I am SO GLAD it's not - I was rather curious to see how the pregnancy went.

Kurama eating the birds was hysterical. I also like you explaining the two sets of sounds coming from both human and Youko ears. This is an incredible story and I can't wait for the next installment! You rule!

oohh wow i can't wait for the next chapter

Brillance. Absolutely brillant. I'm like this *hold her index finger and her thumb about a 1/2 inch away from each other* far from jumping your Yoko. Damn sexy manipulative bastards. Keep up the great work!

Pretty powerful stuff. I liked the confrontation between the trio, and the fact that it was made sort-of-all-right (though nothing can make cheating completely right) by Keiko's previous unfaithfulness. I do feel sorry for Biki though, paying for the adults' mistakes by being left behind by half of her family.

OH...MY...God! That had to be the best intense Kurama/Keiko fight I've ever seen. I mean normally when I read a Kurama/Ysuke, I expect there to be some turmoil that revolves around Keiko, but that was by far the best breakup scene I've ever seen. Kurama was so cold, calm, and calculating and yet I really believe he was in his element. You did an awesome job on that scene and dare say you are number one at the moment. I did not expect half the things that were said...and Keiko having another man's child just so she could hold on to Yusuke, oh man that was good. Anyway, I think that's it for now. Keep up the great work! Now onto the next chapter.

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The bird thing was amusing, extremely amusing. I could just see the chore it would become for Yusuke to explain to Yomi that Kurama found the birds to work well for midnight snacks lol Can't wait to read more, update soon please.

Very good first chapter, this is my second favorite yaoi pairing. I like your writing style and attention to detail. I'm off to read chapter two.

I greatly enjoyed chapter two, Hiei's reaction to Kurama's indescretion was lovely. Just like I would have expected in this situation given the nature of their relationship. I'm off to read Ch. 3

Reviewing for Chapter three. I can only imagine what Keiko's reaction to this is going to be, I can't picture her taking this too well. Not to mention Hiei. While I doubt he will be happy at hearing Yusuke is pregnant I doubt he'd be any happier hearing they are attempting to kill the kids off, considering his own background. At any rate I greatly enjoyed this chapter. I'm off to read the next one.

I have to say I like this chapter the best, the emotions running between all three of them are so very high. Extremely appropriate given the circumstances. I adore how you are portraying Kurama in this, showing his ruthless side with Keiko. That's exactly how I prefer seeing him. Keiko's hypocrasy is amazing, I'm impressed that Yusuke had the restraint that he did, she fully deserved to get some sense at least shaken into her for her hurtful words not to mention attempting to pass of another mans child as his. I cannot wait to read the next chapter, this is an extremely well written story and I look forward to reading more. Update soon please.