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Awww!! That chapter was so cute and sweet and...a little on the nasty side with the birthing, but that's okay. Kurama is like the cutest co-father ever! It was too sweet everything he did for Yusuke. I really liked this chapter. It was a very fluff chapter but it was still sooooo great! One thing, though, grammar wise that I noticed: You said Yusuke was the 'atheist' of Kurama when I think you meant 'antithesis'. Update soon!

wow i love this chapter i especially can't wait to see how yusuke takes to being a mother.

Excellent chapter, I imagine they are both immensely happy that this part of it is now over with though they may be wishing for the time Yusuke was pregnant to be back once things settle down and they realize babies aren't easy lol Can't wait to read more. Update soon please

How the hell do you manage to make a pregnant Yusuke in character? Because it's a crazy concept, but you do it...you wirte a PREGNANT Yusuke IN CHARACTER. I'm still shaking my head in wonder.

Also - the analysis of Youko's character - how he views himself vs. how others view him and the reasoning behind what others view as his cold behavior was done exquisitely. You gave Youko Kurama more dimension...thank you.

Kurama seeing the head crowning and it dawning on him that "this is real", was amazing. I can't wait to see him finally seduce our favourite new daddy!

You SO rule.

So far the story is heating up. I can't wait to find out more of Kurama's motives and how Yusuke will react to them. I am also looking forward to maybe more mood swings from Yusuke, that would be pretty funny and maybe an appearance by Hiei could stir things up.

I am so dearly in love with this story right now! I originally read the prologue but didn't return to finish, but now that I'm caught up I can say how awesome it is! There was so much deception and deceit going on. The bonds of love and friendship were tested so adeptly. And you wrote it all so well. I could see it when you described actions and I felt it when you described feelings. It's just great! Not to mention the plot is amazing in itself! I can't believe Keiko cheated on Yusuke!!! He is a great man, that's for sure, to never let her know he knew. Will you tell us who it was with? I really want to know. Also, I love how you wrote Kurama. He really is perfect in this. Cold-blooded but not completely evil. I love it! I also like the interactions and reactions and reasons you have for everything that happens in this story. I truthfully have never liked mpreg stories, but this one bypasses all that. I guess everything else overcome that, but then again, even the mpreg parts are hilarious! This story is just all around great. Wonderful job!

hey! great fic so far... i kinda don't know what i'm writting exactly, since it's four in the morning, but who cares, right?!
anyway, i really like this, i just have a couple of things to say:
1. sometimes you don't finish words. you use the wrong form of them.
2. sometimes you don't put your sentences together correctly. i still got the point, but i was rearranging words and stuff in my head.
3. WHO IS BIKI'S FATHER?!!! IT'S KILLING ME HERE!!
that's about it, so update, and i'll try to find it again and read what you add!!~

YAY!!!!!! this fic-y is tuning out great.....keep writing, if you dont ill cry.......*tear*

absotively love it hunny. Keep it up and update a.s.a.p.

Like it & can hardly wait for more, I've been checking for updates on this twice a day.