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OMG I'm so happy that they finally got together. That was a great chapter, nice and long the way I like them. I'm scared now for the kits. I can't imagine that Kurama's plants would harm the babies, so you've left a pretty damn good cliffy. Good for you! Can't wait for more.

Yes, i thoroughly enjoyed it. No, i doubt there's anyway it could improved or get any better than it already is. I thought it was postively amazing, and i'm glad thing are progressing and kuwabara and hiei....never would've guessed...interesting though

yes! yes! yes! yusuke finally gives in! and kurama wastes no time in getting what he wants. but what the hell is with the glowing and what happened to the kits? anyway, excellent work. this story is soooooo going on my favorites list.

wow. that's all i can say after readin this chapter. i liked the fact you had everyone come to see the new couple and their children and the little twist with kuwabara and hiei pairing up, nice. its about time yusuke got over his fear of being intimate with kurama. can't wait for the next chapter. keep it up

You know, I don't think there's anything that could make this chapter any better than it already is, except for a more detailed lemon. But even that wish is because of aniticipation built up from the rest of the story. You surprised me a lot in this chapter, though. I didn't expect that Yukina/other female or Hiei/Kuwabara relationship going on. Of course I know of a lot of stories that bring H & K together, I didn't think this would be one of them. Luckily, it doesn't seem you'll be spending much time on either of those pairings, so I'll be okay with them. Yukina seriously surprised me, though! I was like 'WHAT!', and with Hiei and Kuwabara I was like 'Are You Serious?!'. It was great!

Also, all the sexual tension you built up between Kurama and Yusuke to get to this point just made this all the better. It was almost beautiful, the way you described it. The ending was super-cute, too, with what you did with their ki and the children. It would be Kurama using his plants to care for his children when he's getting pleasure! ^^ Still, I sort of wish their climax would have been written, but the way you ended it was still lovely. Update soon!!

wow im glad yusuke finally gave now i can't wait to see how the servants are going to act to yusuke mateship

so cute.
love kurama and his kits.
ugh stupid keiko. wonder what happens with biki?
hope yusuke warms up to kurama and then they become a real family.

UPDATE SOON!

OOOh! ^ o ^ What Happens Next I love everything so far. What happens next? What? Happens? Next? I Hate Cliff Hangers. Please update soon I wanna know what happens to Kurama,Yusuke,and the kits.

This story is awesome to read, good pace with great characters. I stayed up till 3:00 am this morning to finish. It was so gripping to read I just couldn't stop till the last chapter was read. I loved the visual picture that comes to mind when reading some of the scenes and the birth chapter was great and moving, lots of angst and emotions coming through from Karama and Yusuke both. Hope the next chapter will be ready soon keep up the good work.

This is an awesome fic. The only other word I can think of to describe it is, "Brilliant".