rate_review Reviews

This is a great story. Great plot development and long intersting chapters. I'm glad that Kurama and Yusuke have everything straightened out now. Is it really over? I'd love to see more of this (especially interested in Hiei/Kuwabara and the kits!) Yusuke's way of saying I love you made me smile ;-)

This chapter was absolutely awesome!!! I hope that you make a sequel or something. Let is know what happens to the kits. I also would like to know what happens between Hiei and Kuwabara. You're a great writer and I would like to see more of your fics. I'm a huge fan of Yusuke and Kurama because Kurama and Hiei is so over done. Thanks so much for sharing!

Wonderful. I never saw the twist coming, never expected that King Enma had a hand in it. I like the fact that he was afraid of Hiei and Kurama teaming up, when Yusuke and Kurama would make just as formidable a team! You wrapped this up quite nicely, involving everyone including Genkai (which you get so many points for).

I liked the exploration of Yusuke and Kurama's true feelings for each other, they were trying to decide whether their realtionship was merely forced or if it had truly blossomed into something deeper, and I liked Yusuke's almost innocent charm when it came to convincing Kurama of his love.

The Hiei/Kuwabara scenes were humourous as well, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I hope you continue to write for the fandom!

Hee hee, very nice chapter here! You totally rock the Kurama/Yusuke fandom! This was a really great chapter. I like how you had their mating kind of a plan all put together by Enma, and the way you turned it into a big problem between them - the questioning of emotions and all. Also, the way you brought in the gods this chapter was great and really unexpected. Ending = awesome!!!

Only thing that bothered me was the lack of page breaks in this chapter compared to the others. It made the scene changes a tad abrupt.

aaaww i love the end it was a perfect mix of angst and fluffiness.

please, please, please, for the love of god, update. I think I might actually die if you don't. I <3 this story. oh yeah...^^

OMG what happened to the babies? Your fic is absolutely amazing! You're a brillant writer and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon, I have to know what happens next.

You got it! in the prologue, admittedly while Kurama was 'bottom' however, as the scene concluded, he went yokai. Yusuke didn't get pregnant by bottoming to Kurama, he became pregnant because Kurama's semen was smeared on the 'scar' on his stomach.

I read in a magazine once (a woman was bemoaning the fact that she was pregnant (but hadn't had full penetration by her boyfriend). They indulged in a bit of dry humping but with her wearing only a pair of panties. Sperm can (and did) travel through her underwear, up her vagina and that was how she wound up pregnant.

Of course this was YEARS ago that I read this so my medical facts may be skewered.

Anyway, thank you for reading and enjoying! The lemon scenes, at least for me, are extremely difficult to create. I ususally know where the scene will dissolve into moans and groans, so I just put 'INSERT SEX SCENE HERE' in that space and continue writing. It may take about a couple of weeks to write an 10 chapter story, and an extra week to do the lemon scene.

I've only started writing Kurama/Yusuke fics because the dearth of this pairing is scary. I see about a 100 Hiei/Kurama stories to about 1 story of Kurama/Yusuke.

Gods, I love this story. First of all, you write wonderfully long chapters and they're dense chapters - a lot happens and you take the time to delve into their psychological aspects, giving your writing terrific depth.

Then there's the lemon. You write lemons that are different than anything I've seen out there - and that's a good thing...a very good thing. Your lemons have so much heat and are incredibly erotic and you do it in such a subtle way without letting them take over or counteract the plot. Nice.

The Kuwabara/Hiei pairing slapped me right in the face and I laughed out loud!

As far as improvements, the only thing I can think of is that you say in the latest chapter that Kurama was dominant in the prologue lemon, but when I read the prologue over, because of the despcription and the lack of proper names, it seems like Yusuke is the dominant one. I just figured that they switched dominance over the course of the night and that's how Yusuke ended up pregnant...am I wrong?

I wish my reccommended reading list was back on my profile page, because I'd like to add this to my list!

Wow, this is such a good story. I can't wait to see the next update and find out who sent the plants to kidnap the babies. Well, whoever it is has better watch out b/c Yusuke and Karama will catch them.

I have really enjoyed the entire angst/drama of the story. Please keep of the good work.