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for As we lay

by chilli

person Aots
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story!
person Hemamal
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeeaahh! the babies are born! They must be so adorable. Espescially, seeing who their fathers are.
person Hemamal
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell?
person Hemamal
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's right Kurama keep charge over your man!!!
person Hemamal
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw!! All things are forgiven and we get a prefect ending. It's weird that the twins are thinking about mating so soon though. But seeing that they can already pick locks with a paper clip I guess I shouldn't be too surprised.
person Hemamal
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kurama! Having to abort his babies has got to be really hard on him.
person Hemamal
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was one hell of a twist. Speaking of twists, Kurama was just deadly in his assult. Absolutly flawless!!!
person Hemamal
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very HOT!!!
person mini.tales
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh child! Your writing touched me in places that I would *lurve* to be touched more often. Uhh, huh! Your picturesque writing, leaving out the gory details for me to fill in myself... well al I can say is: THANKS!!

I believe that the human imagination can do wonders with the tiniest of prompts, and you did exactly that. Again, Thank You.
I have only read your intro chapter and I made sure it was a accompanied by that very song! Your title made me dredge it up from my playlist and have it on repeat... I even sang along with your lyrics in the end!

I'm afraid I am a lost cause to your writing. *sigh*
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I loved this story!!!! Right now I'm so moved. I'm glad everyone ended up happy in the end. I am looking forward to reading more of your work> BRAVA!!