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for Heroes Unite

by ss_dragon_lady

person Angel_eyes
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Makes a couple sounds of disbelief* cliffhanger much???? How could you just leave it there??? Well, actually, I get it, cuz it definitly leaves me personally wanting more. I love this story. Love the entire arc, which I've read all of now. And I'm officiall reviewing from this point on. Please update soon. I have to see what happens. I'm desperate.
person XxBatsxX
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;o; Aaahhhh! Kaihei! Whats gonna HAPPEN?!?!?! Dude dont leave me hanging for to long! =D
person nette
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nnnnnoooooooo. poor kaihei and i thought things would get a little better. and who is this prankster that keeps our heroes on edge. its just crazy. ok update soon and as always keep up the good writing.
person Koneko
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, not good, not good! That was such a bad cliffy. I was worried what was going to happen, with the bean and all since they are demons, but this may be the worst that could happen. Please update soon. I want to know what happens to Kihiei (did I spell that right?).
person nette
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. this chapter was crazy. poor kaihei. the little guy can't catch a break now can he. and as for toushi he better start behaving himself before hiei makes good on his threat. also leaving deer carcasses in the boys' rooms, that was interesting. can't wait to find out wat happens next
person Skwishee
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nnnn, Kaihei is adorable X__X I'm overwhelmed by his cuteness. XDSeriously I'd so kidnapp him, but I'd probably get killed for it. ::cough:: ANYWAY, since I need to form a somewhat coherent review...I didn't think I'd like this installment very much when I saw the description. Sure I love DBZ and I love YYH but together...no. But I read it anyway and I was pleasantly surprised. I hope to see another installment soon, I can never get enough KxH goodness.
person Flames Angel
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story and think i will die if it is not upated soon.
anyway i wish you good luck on your next chapter!
JA!
person nette
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no more taking too long to update :( anyway i liked it, i hope toushi can figure out his feelings cuz if they don't squash it now it may be too late. and when are we going to learn more about who attacked them, that's wat i want to know. okay i'm done talking for now so bye. update soon :)
person nette
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv it , update soon
person nette
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i...love...this...story....! especially with the comapring between hiei and vegeta. i always wanted to read a fic with them two meeting up, it was so funny. i really want to know whose pulling all those pranks, there funny but i wanna know whose doing it. keep up the good job and can't wait to read the next chapter