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by ss_dragon_lady

person Angel_eyes
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! That's cute! Another fox kit!! It's so sad its mother died, but... I still love it!!! Please update soon!
person comicfancat
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was rereading your other stories(heights of) and thought to give this one a chance.And am very happy I did,its quit a mix match set up with both stories and the different way things are done in both.Your pulling it off beautifully with both.I can't wait for the next chapter to find out more of whats going on.Its interesting to see Kurama and Hiei have so many problems with their oldest son,just when you think they've broken through to him something else happens.And I can't wait to see who keeps pulling all the pranks on everyone,Haven't heard from Kewa or Yusuke in a while and am wondering whats happening on that front and with Hiei's old boss as well.
Please update soon......................nicely done
person Skwishee
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh i think I smell a lemon approaching \^_^/ They need it after all the shit they've had to deal with.
person Angel_eyes
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! SO SWEET!!!! I loved the chapter. And everyone's happy and alive.... as long as something something doesn't happen... But anyways, update soon!! I can't wait for more!!
person XxBatsxX
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww, that was cuuute! 8D Luved it <3
person Skwishee
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm glad Kaihei's alright ^^ he's so damn cute.
person nette
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
again good chapter and thank you thank you thank you for not killing kaihei, i dont know what i would have done if you did. that was cute having toushi come check-up on kaihei and it was fuuny how you made kaihei drink all the blood that was priceless. ok you know the drill update soon and keep on writing good chapters. :D
person XxBatsxX
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;o; KAIHIE!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! DONT LET HIM DIE!!!!!! NO! NO! NO! NO! NOOOOOOOO!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!! please...... T-T
person Angel_eyes
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EH?????? Seriously not fair!!
I wanna know what happens to him! I love him to much to let him die!! By the power invested in me as a reveiwer, I will not let him die!!! Well actually I don't have that power, but ya know what? I've learned to love that kit way too much as I've read this story, and the last one! Dying, just isn't and option!! But I really do love the story so far. Please continue soon!
person nette
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooo. you cant kill kaihei its just wrong and too sad. (sobs). he's just a baby. i hope they catch the batard whose behind this soon. (sobs) so emotional right now. anyway update soon and dont kill kaihei. ok im done.