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NoOoOoOoOoOoO!~!~! ;o; AHHHHHHH!!!!!! That was so sad.... I have to know what it is that is going to happen in this fic T-T its tearing me apart....

Wow...Just wow. I can't believe Kurama actually went... That's not fair!! And I love Hiei's plan even if it didn't quite work out!! But, I know everything will be alright...I hope....I'm almost begging....No, I'm really begging because Kurama dying would tear Hiei apart and he went through the trouble of getting pregnant again, so that wouldn't be fair. And, it would tear the boys apart too. Losing a parent....
So yes, I'm am begging, hopeing, even praying(and i don't usually pray for something like this) that everything will turn out alright...But...if this is like most good stories, which it is, we wont get the outcome for atleast two chapters...Well, I'm waiting!! Chop-chop!

i can't believe you had him leave, after all that he still decided to go. poor hiei, my heart goes out to him and toushi. especially what hiei 'conspired' to do. man, this just made me feel helpless. i hope kurama will be all right. i hope once this story is over that things will be a little more peaceful for them all. i wonder what the saiyans will do when they hear that kurama left. update soon.

OMG you are like EVIL. >_> That made me want to cry. Now I'll be all crazy until the next chapter comes out X___X

You're mean, you made me cry!

I feel a payback coming on,but does there really have to be heart ache as well?And what about the sayons(sp?) they have a stake in this to.I really hope Yusuke and Kewa come to help with this(they'll be needed to keep Hiei from killing everything that moves).Well I'm on the edge of my seat with this and a little sad as well.Please update soon

AWW!!! Poor everyone!! Kids missing, threats! It must be hard on them. I love it! I mean... not you know the kids are missing and that blackmail is coming from it, but it really just adds to the whole story. Every detail of it. I really didn't see it coming. Please, please, I want more!!

I have never reviewed any of your stories and the guilt was catching up with me. You are such a good writer and you have a special gift in the way you make the story seem like a real life event. I don't believe i have ever been so addicted to any stories, and that includes books also. Wow, i just reread this whole thing and i believe i come across as a stalker...dont worry though, i haven't done that in years, heehee, just kidding. Anyway, i hope that you keep the quality stories coming.

this was a cute chapter. i liked the fact you had the gand get hit with shaving cream. i would have luved to see their faces, especially an angry trunks. anyway, i enjoyed the bonding time you had with kaihei and his parents. i think thats what the liitle kit needed, some reassurance and a good douse of fresh air. i cant wait to see how this new addition to the family will work out, espeically with a wolf, a fox/fire/koorime kit, a fox spirit and one mild-temepered fire koorime. that should be something to look out for. cant wait to read more.

This story is coming along great.And oh my I don't know how the Saiyans are going to react to more beings in the already crowded house(could be fun)Plus the pay back for Hiei is also fun to imagine.This new add on could be good for Kaihei's confidence faxtor.In helping to protect and raise the kits he now has someone looking up to him.
I can't wait for the next chapter to be updated (hope its soon)Are Kewa and Yusuke going to make anymore appearances?