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by ss_dragon_lady

person XxBatsxX
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;o; ... poor Kurama. It was so hard for me to read that. You must kill them all! 8O a slow and cruel death fits >8D *evil laughter* Hiei should kick Mukuros' ass and yomis' but yeah whooo~ cant wait for the next one >8D
person comicfancat
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gd,how could you end it there!. Whats going to happen to their youngest he is out in the open behind a tree and ripe for capture.I was on the edge of my seat and than.... the chapter ended.Ouch,so both teams know of at least part of the enemy and wow the sayions(sp?) children fight right beside the parents.Blood and gore all around.Nice family time.Poor Kurama must be really bad good thing Yusuke came with Hiei even if thry wouldn't want him to see them in bad shape.Please update soon (a couple days)can't wait
person Skwishee
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah the suspense T__T You love to kill people with cliffhangers don't you. I hope you update soon or I'm gonna freak out waiting XDDD
person XxBatsxX
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw ;o; poor Kurama.... But damn this is gonna be be one hell of a battle xDDD and that bitch Muruko's there too! HAHAHA!! That's messed up/funny that she's there, she can sure hold a grudge xDDD HAHAHAHA!!! I cant wait for the next Chapter dude =D I've been crazy about this one all week, and for the one coming up i'm gonna have ants in my pants =3 Whooooooo~
person Firekeeper727
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! And I wanted to say that I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed before. When I found this story it was already on the twentieth chapter... and then I was just waiting to see how fast you would update. Sorry again, but I guess better late than never... right? Well, I can't wait til the next update... make it soon, ne? Keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Panda-chan
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT !! Did I mention that I love your story? Please update soon!! Your the only Yu Yu author I read!HEARTS!!
person nette
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon update soon update soon. you must update soon. this story is getting too good. and poor kaihei if only if the believed in his ablities then he would be a top notch figther like his fathers and brother. i hope by the end he finds out that he is just as a strong as they are. and what about kurama. i don't think i want to know what he looks like, if he is in any worse condition than what hiei was, then i don't think i could handle it. anyway update soon. :)
person XxBatsxX
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xDD Yomi's a real Bastard in your fics, Hahaha Thats effin crazy that he came back, though i had a feeling that jerk would, there wasnt really that many options besides an OC. I cant wait for the next chapter ^o^ Whooo~ a week is to long xD
person tala ishter
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i did see that coming. well you have to update is soon. i hope that the two kids made it safe to the group. at the sametime i hope that kurama is ok
person comicfancat
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,what a chapter,I guess I should've known it was Yomi yet that was a surprise.Poor Kurama having to go through this all over again.And where did the kids go?He gave them a portal but it didn't have to be for home.Wait till Hiei finds out who it is( oh boy)is blood going to fly.Yet Yomi with robot limbs how to fight that,what about Hiei's old boss she was part robot(wasn't she)I'm glad Yusuke and the others will get a shot at helping out to.This should be good! Very nice job.
Update soon please, even though you just did this is good and its hard to wait for the next chapter