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by ss_dragon_lady

person XxBatsxX
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;o; ...*shocked*... *speechless*
person Panda-chan
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!???? You killed Kurama! WHY!!?? I know that it makes the story more tragic but it still makes me sad. Nice writing tho. Hope you update soon. I need to know what happens to Hiei. HEARTS!!
person comicfancat
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gd!,how could you kill Kurama after everything they've been through.What about the boys and the unborn child?In Hiei's grief I don't think he can raise the 3 alone.And with his boss dead is Hiei now a lord,even though he gave it up?I'm sitting here cring not believing you Killed Kurama.Please say that Botan and Koenma can't do something about this.Please update soon ...pretty please.
person Skwishee
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You suck T_____T I hate deathfics >_>
person sweetnsexy89
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!!??? HOW CAN YOU KILL OFF KURAMA LIKE THAT AND LEAVE W/ HIS CHILDREN ALL BY HIMSELF!!!?
person sweetnsexy89
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I mean to say...How can you leave HIEI w/ their children all by himself!?
person sweetnsexy89
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*meant* im sorry! ^^;
person Tori
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As much as this makes me look like i like torture, it was a really good chapter!
person Angel_eyes
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god. Poor Kurama. And Hiei to find the man he loves in that condition. That's terrible!! But you wrote it out really well. I was completely absorbed in the story. A coulple of your chapters here have brought me close to tears, and that's not easy to do. Good job, I can't wait to see what happens next.
person nette
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
briliant, simply brilliant. i can't get enough of you stories and this chapter was not exception. man, yomi na dhis crew are such assholes i can't wait tofr hiei to beat the shit out of them. i hope kurama will be ok, he has to they have another child on the way and somethigntells me when and if he finds out he will find some solace in that he has something more to live for. cant wait to read the next chapter, hiei's gonna get them.