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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You suck ass!!!!!!!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your making my heart hurt ;o; but it was to good to look away.... i love things like that =D
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cried though most of this chapter to.I forgot about the dragon balls and what they could do(nice going on that one).They lost the baby for sure but what about poor Hiei?It still falls down to (Why)after everything they've been through in all the arc's does it have to have one of them die?.You write very well and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can i threaten to kill you now or later. you just luv toying with ppl's emotions don't ya. well i have some words to say to you...this chapter was freakin' awesome, though i have to admit i am a little angry that you had hiei do that. i swear this fic is an emotional rollercoaster, one minute we're happy the next we're bawling our eyes out which means you're doing a good job of writing a great story. can't wait to find out what happens next. its just too bad the baby is lost now. ok i'm done.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're right. There will be killing if all doesn't turn out well, but I get the feeling you're not just gonna off Hiei and let that be that so there will no killing YET. :3 I really love this story and you always manage to keep me on my toes. Can't wait till the next part gets here.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THis is good i hope that you update it soon.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...He. Did. Not. Just. Die. Oh wow, that was an emotional chapter. Wow. Poor Hiei. That would be so terrible to have to deal with. Losing your love. Aww!!! I want to see the what comes of this. And the new kit.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Sobs) so sad that Kurama died... But! being the everhopeful optimist that I am, I'll just hope that you'll bring him back to his family and even give him a similar lifespan to Hiei, so that he'll never leave his mate alone again (makes BIG HOPEFUL PUPPYDOG EYES and wispers "Please!") Love your arc anyway! Good luck with the writing!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::Depressed:: Man that SUCKS! All that fighting and rescuing only to lose Kurama anyway! ::Sobs:: I can't believe it... man that was such a shocker... I thought for sure he was going to survive, and now I just wanna curl up in a ball and cry. Great job on the story... and I look forward to whatever else you have planned for it... though I'm just a little bit stunned and saddened right now.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how dare you, (starts to cry) you can't ...kill...kurama...(crying)...not after all they've benn through. it was sweet though how he saw how his two sons fought together in order to avenge them. but it was also sad that hiei didn't get there in time to hold his fox as he took his final breathe. i hope this isn't the end for kurama, not when they have another kit on the way, and hiei didn't even get the chance to tell him. please don't end it this way. its too painful. (stops crying)ok update soon . oh yeah great chapter. still painfull though