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by ss_dragon_lady

schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I managed to miss this one. I love, no _LOVE_ your Bingo scene! The bells ringing and the walkers and troll dolls! I think I'm having flashbacks! Fantastic way to stick those guys in the middle of what can only be, from their perspective, human Hell on Earth. And the fact that Vegeta only blew up the numberboard and no Vegeta/Goku battle erupted is testament to the ladies' training skills!

I am so reading more!
person lilevilgurl92
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was THE best kuramahiei story i've read so far.i've been reading your arcs since i started reading kurama and hiei fanfics.actually one of the first stories i read since reading kurama and hiei yaoi fanfics was one of your stories. you are so far one of my favorite authors. i can't wait to read more of your acrs!keep up the good work!
person Angel_eyes
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's gonna end? Damn. I really like this story. It's soo good. And the chapter was fun to read. I enjoyed it. Please update soon, and have another story soon. Thanks in advance.
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Tired to Sign In)
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA I KNEW IT! I had a feeling Kurama and Hiei pulled the stolen items prank, but I wasn't sure. Hehehehe. I love this story, and I can't wait to see the next arc... I hope you have the DBZ charries show up periodically... I'd hate for them never to see each other again. You have done a wonderful job, and you never cease to amaze me. I look forward to the final chapter, thank you so much for a wonderful read. ::Leaves lots of chocolates and pretty red roses::
person Danica Loy
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the ending was great! I love this story so much! Go KURAMA AND HIEI! Thieves to very end!!!
person comicfancat
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I guess I shoulda figured out it was Hiei taking the pictures since he wouldn't be seen doing it due to his speed.(nice one)Very nice chapter and I'm glad I was right about Hiei still being the hier to a 3rd of demon world.It'd be fun to have everyone of the Sayians visit them there and see the other side of things.
Very nicely done
person XxBatsxX
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, i just thought the kids were behind them, not everyone xDDD nice chap, i cant wait to see what happens next =D
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay yay yay yay! another grat chapter and its not a sad one about time. aaaaawwwwwwww another hiei/kurama spawn i cant wait to see what it will be and what it will look like, u shuld have them have a girl, i wonder how they wuld handle that. lol. cant wait to read more.
person comicfancat
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cool chapter and I can just imagine the twists and turns coming up for them now.And I can only imagine how much tention there will be between Koenma and his father over this as well.Very Nice Job on this as always
person XxBatsxX
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOO~ There back together! YEAH! .... but i thought the baby was going to die =/ oh well Whooo~ <_< not that i wanted it to die or anything i was just under that impression ._.