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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, It about time you update! Will, I looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how it will go this time, I really hope Kuwabara won't get hurt too much. Anyway, update sooner!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shakes a finger at Yusuke* Bad Spirit Detective, no cookie for you. Taking Kuwa away from Hiei like that. *grins* Had to play catch up with the chaps but it was worth it.
You have some grammer and spelling issues, but I can't say much as my punctuation is horrible. ^^; But I enjoyed reading it and patiently await the next chapter. ^^
You have some grammer and spelling issues, but I can't say much as my punctuation is horrible. ^^; But I enjoyed reading it and patiently await the next chapter. ^^
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
r u EVER gonna finish this thing!?!
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Decided to leave a review in hopes for a sooner update. I'm in love with uke Kuwabara and I like that all the guys are fighting over him in their own subtle ways, though I'm not really sure what Kurama is doing. I hope Hiei gets some revenge on Yusuke for taking Kuwabara away again. In fact I hope Kuwabara gets some shots in too, I mean he was going of his own free will what right does Yusuke have to say what he does or doesn't do? It was great keep it coming, can't wait for some citrus.
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love it! I hope you update soon! I starting to think Yusuke had a crush on Kuwabara when they were kids.
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April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nononono, sweet heart u missunderstand! the combat was lovely it was the DIALOUGE that was hystarical.
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April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh! oh! its kuwa isnt it? ISNT IT!?!
get on with the story already! we want slash!
the combat was fine, the dialouge was cheesily funny.
"Awwwww(cute sound) spit.."...LOL! hehe, spit, hehe....awwwwww...lol!
get on with the story already! we want slash!
the combat was fine, the dialouge was cheesily funny.
"Awwwww(cute sound) spit.."...LOL! hehe, spit, hehe....awwwwww...lol!
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April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude, that was the worst combat dialouge i have EVER seen and i actually enjoyed the whole fight scene because of its lameness. how...ironic? whatever!LOL!
w00t! im with wouldntUno or whatever her/his name is! this story is adddicting and its cute how u responed to each of ur reviewers. go u!
ooo, i wonder how kuwa will react to all this! hehe....
w00t! im with wouldntUno or whatever her/his name is! this story is adddicting and its cute how u responed to each of ur reviewers. go u!
ooo, i wonder how kuwa will react to all this! hehe....
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April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its figures! poor kuwa...no one would help 3 yrs o when he was being kidnaped but of course now that he actually WANTS to help hiei find his sister everyones suddenly their to rescue him! beh! this should be good.
ur fight scenes r....amusing.
ur fight scenes r....amusing.
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April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn, another cliffer clearly leading to anther flashback. sigh. oh well. nice fight scene and speech, hehe...omg, that was so bad it was great!