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My poor friend! I'm glad that you're taking a break so you don't burn out. If people get burnt out, their stories die; which has happened alot on this site. And most of the 'dead' stories were good too. So, have fun with your break! Bye-bye.

I know all to well how that goes. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. I like the small changes that you've made. I even enjoy the new characters that you have in the preview/continuation thingy. I've been moving and trying to get things liveable once more. Thank goodness that things are starting to simmer down. Take as long as you need. No pressure here. Just do what you gotta do. :-)

OMG i thought that you were kicked off the site or something i have been looking for this fanfic but i can see it doesn't have all the chapters it use to but i dont mind, im just so happy to find this fanfic again, one of my favorites, so please update soon!!!! and i missed readin your fanfic, almost made me want to cry that i couldnt find this story. lol. srry for the weird review. Just shows how much i love this story lol

You-
That's ok ^^. I understand about being busy and having a life...well...the busy part more ^^;; hahaha. Ok, noted in my note book. I hope you liked the Yusuke/Keiko AMV I sent you and I will do a Yusuke/Hiei for you ^^. Well you won't have to wait too long ^_~. so ENJOY!!

Me-
Thank you for doing the one-shot for me...I can't wait to read it. About the AMV...I haven't gotten it.
Now, about this chapter. I liked it the first time around, but...while re-reading it, I believe that I skipped some parts. I don't remember reading some parts. So...it's good that you're reposting these, so I know that I've read the entire chapter and not just parts. Good chapter too! I love how Hiei was worried about the injury that the reader recieved from Suzaku, but wouldn't say so outloud. I think that's how ya spell his name...if not, oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Bye.

Hey girl wazup!!! That would be great that you're doing the sequel to the story and I can't wait to read it. I'm a very patient girl.............well sort of. Can't wait for the next chapter where Kurama comes some what to the rescue and comes out like Tuxedo Mask, you know what I mean from the manga and all. Anyway, I'm also going to start on more stories but not until maybe the end of the month, or early next month, depends on work and all. And I know how it is with work and all.........work work work, wanting to make a slave driver out of you. Well got to go and I'll see the next chapter when it's posted.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley

You- Cool ^^ I’m glad my story is relaxing for you ^^. I’m glad you find it interesting ^^. Ok, if you say so ^^ hahaha, still think if people look a bit deeper for some parts and not put TOO much thought in others they will figure it out ^^;; and I’m glad you are betaing for me, and I will get some of the new chapters to you soon…I hope…I should just send you what I got so far, though I’m going to be re-writing the ENTIRE ending of the DT…ooops…wait…I mean how Yusuke fights and stuff, I’m going to do it the way I want ^^;;; wait…just forget it, you’ll just see ^^;; hahaha. Yeah a one shot ^^. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I don’t know when it is or was but all the same ^^. Awwwww I’m sorry to hear that! (hugs) but you just never know ^^, this year you might have a great time ^^. But I really need to know WHO because I don’t know who you love the most as a couple! And it drives me nuts ^^;;; so please tell me soon…and if your b-day past then I will make you TWO one for the one I missed and one for next year, though I will still make you one for your next year’s b-day anyway ^_~. Hehehe. Thanks ^^. Hahaha, Hiei fan eh? ^^ he’s tied with Yusuke in my book hahaha ^^. Well here it is! I love long reviews ^^ so thanks for the long review!! ENJOY!!

Me- Wow, took me a while to be back and check on your story. School's a pain in the butt. My b-day is May 27, so you haven't missed it. You don't need to make me two stories...one will make me happy. Let's see...who do I like as a couple...that's a very good question. Since I am a Hiei fan...let's have him and...I don't know!! *bangs head on couches arm rest* Oh, I know! If it's a male/female story let's have Yusuke and Keiko. And...if it's a male/male story let's have Yusuke and Hiei. Now, it's your choice which you do...I like both pairings. I'm glad to know that you like long reviews, because my last one was VERY long.
I love Hiei's sarcasim in this chapter at the end...it makes me laugh. Good chapter, by the way. What you said about the DT, it's got me wondering...I can't wait to see how you're redoing that. *sits on couch, pondering the possible outcome*

Again another fabulous chapter. So that was who Carl was. Need to read the manga all over again. Though I have to agree with you, the manga is alot better then the anime because there is 1.) more info on the character. 2.) more scenes where it wasn't in the anime. and 3.) well............can't think of three but maybe later. 'Wanna Be' was a great song for the fight scene as well. But what was the second song. I'm guessing the song is called 'Girl Power' or something like that but who is it by, I kind of forgot. I still like the idea of reading people's thought, that would be a neat treat. Well, waiting patiently for the next chapter and swing by at my story and see the new re-posted chapter and all. Talk to you later.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley

You- Thanks ^^ I think so too. I re-read what I orginally had....YUCK!!! ^^;; seriously...did I REALLY use to write like THAT?! Hahaha. Baseball scene....I have a lot of baseball scenes in this story because the author of YYH, as well as my self hehehe, are HUGE baseball fans ^^. I LOVE NY Yankees!! GO YANKEES!!!! (slaps self and takes deep breath) sorry about that....Yes I am too. I love reading long chapters, which I know you guys do too hahaha, and I like writting long chapters, though they normally take a lot out of me after I'm done. Yeah, I am trying to add to my fight scenes, but not only that I'm focusing more on your relationship as it grows with Kuwabara ^^. There are also more hints to what Kuwabara knows....oops....wait...was that a hint? grrrr...now I don't know ^^;; hahaha. Well, you won't have to wait too long for either of those, I already started the first chapter to the third season, so as soon as I write that out I will send it to you. ENJOY!!!
Me- I love reading a story that takes time. It seems to relax me...especially if it's an interesting story; like this one! Hm...what Kuwabara knows...na, that's not a hint...at least not that big of a hint. Yay, I'll be betaing again! I really like betaing for you...it's fun. Could be the way that you write or the story, but I really enjoy it. ^^

You- Ok that's it!! Oh, if anyone....and I mean ANYONE...besides my beta and Fayth that is....can figure out what Kuwabara knows and why he is hesitant to letting him self really fall for you....I will write you a one shot between whoever...and I mean WHOEVER you want!!!! ^___^. I won't confirm your guess in answering your review, but will send you a note through your e-mail ^^, so leave your e-mail....oh and if my beta and Fayth want me to write a one-shot of anyone I will hahaha ^^;;; I feel bad that you're out of the prize 'cause you know ^^;;;
Me- Ah, a one shot eh? Hm...I'd like one, yes. But...don't really care whom. If you could, surprise me. My b-day is coming up and...it'll probably suck (like always). So, something like this would make my day a happy one. Anyway...I'm rambling. (Slaps forehead)

I liked this chapter, glad that you didn't have to change anything. I also like the next chapter when Hiei fights...actually anytime that he fights. So I can't wait to re-read the next chapter!! Til then...bye! (Wow...what a long review ^^)

Like always that was a great chapter. Just one question that has been bugging me when I read the last chapter,.................who is Carl Lewis? The name doesn't ring a bell and is it in the manga because I'm sure it's not in the anime or did you come up with it yourself. When you first wrote this I must of forgot to ask you before and now that I'm rereading the story and all, now it's digging my brains out. Well anyway, I can't wait to read again for Hiei vs. Seiyuu( if that is how you spell his name I think, maybe not), and see that end of the Saint Beasts as well and can't wait for the later stuff. Oh and I will be reposting chapter 4 and 5 for my story just for kicks but of course I need to do some fixing to edit them. Then after that I'm editing chapter 6 after that with in that week after the other two and then comes the new chapters that I haven't posted yet. I hope that you will enjoy it and all too. Well keep up the good work as always.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley

Wow! This chapter is better than the first time you posted, awesome work! I love the baseball scene...that makes me laugh everytime that I read it. I'm glad to see that the chapters are getting longer...means that you're putting more work into them (ex: better fight scenes). Can't wait to read the other chapters and to get back to work betaing for you. Until your next chapter.
Bye