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Nice yet again. Hiei can't seem to escape his desires, can he? He's really not going to now that he's agreed to join them. He's trapped, and you did a great job of making sure he knew that. I love the inner turmoil he was feeling. Now what I also loved was that sweet lemon between our two vamps. That was nice yet not overly done. It was cute how you also had them showing their love for each other. And Yususke's demands are requests, huh? I can see how that works. Nice job with Kurama's subservant character in here. Normally, I would detest something like that but you're doling a great job at it yet not making him seem weak or anything. Great job! Update soon!!

So Bui is one of the ones challenging Yusuke. I had been wondering about that and about who Hiei's girlfriend was.
Would I be right in guessing that Karasu and the Toguro brothers are the other three?

I think I need to read the Anita Blake books. A friend did tell me that they were basically vampire S&M porn...


I hope you feel better. ^_^

nice

Well this fic definitely seems interesting. I'm extremely intrigued by this storyline. And you've got me wondering where the relationship of the three will lead to. I'm sure it won't be "strictly business" for long. You're doing a very nice job so far, as usual. And you've even got me wanting to read this series. I might need to go check it out... Update soon!

POUT. But I want the desk scene now.... (stomps feet like 5 year old).

Damn, that was friggin GOOD. Your regular conversations are exquisite and they still reek of sexuality without even trying. Yusuke really makes me drool in this one though, he has an answer for everything "You’re a necromancer, a vampire slayer. You raise the dead and kill them again. You kill us. Why is it you are not a monster and we are?” Um..yeah..how does Hiei answer that?

And Hiei getting in the car and telling Kurama that he hates him and Kurama saying "Not as much as you'd like to". I loved that too.

I say MARK HIM, MARK HIM DAMMIT! (Gets in line to mark Hiei). I like that he doesn't get tired out like the other in his field do, he has amazing power. I know, I know, haphazard review...

O. Poor Hiei. Such conflict for him. Must be frustrating. Being considered a monster by those he slays. Well, I can not wait for more. You're doing a wonderful job with this story!!

This is good so far.I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Damn. I've had the hardest time trying to get AFF to work for me. I couldn't get to any stories, just kept getting "can't find server" I hate that shit.

Kurama is so cute in this fic, I just wanna hug and cuddle him. Hiei's showing a lot of patience with Kurama following him around, but then, who wouldn't want Kurama following them around, lol. The plot is sure thickening. I wonder who is challenging Yusuke? Maybe Sensui or Togoro. Ohhhh maybe Karasu. He's such vampire wannabe anyway. Hiei needs to chill out and let Yusuke mark him, lol. Mmmmmmm, I want Yusuke to mark me. Too yummy and hot. I loved the teaser in your live journal. This fic has me all excited and wanting. I just love it!

OMG! I love you! Well, love the story. Love you for writing it. I adore the Anita Blake books! And vampire stories in general so I am really looking forward to reading more of this!!

wow i may need to start reading these ab books since your idea came from it and see how it is.