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for Wish Upon a Fallen Star

by ladyofhiei

person Depp
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IF YOU DONT UPDATE IN THE NEXT 5 SECONDS IM GONNA........
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should have Yusuke tell Hiei that he doesn't feel ready. Therefore, Hiei is upset and stops staring at Yusuke. Yusuke then will begin to realize that he misses Hiei staring at him and wonders if he made a big mistake by telling Hiei that he wasn't ready when now he truly does feel ready. (hope that made sense) lol But what would be really great, is if a villian from Hiei's past came and started making Yusuke protective and jealous. UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person kit-kit
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i can't wait for yusuke to decide who he wants
person IceAngel
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow awesome story. I'm glad that Yusuke and Hiei were able to get over their fight. It woulda been horrible to see them angry at each other for a long time, the two of them are just too cute together. Plus the way Hiei is bein super protective of Yusuke...Oh wow I was like "awwwwwwwww."

Anyways this story is totally awesome and it actually helped me to forget about my cold. At least while I was reading it. So update soon again! I'll be waiting for more!

~IceAngel~
person kit-kit
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nnnnooo they were doing so good with the blow job and everything. i can't believe yusuke got mad over what hiei said if hiei said that to me i would be honor i wouldn't overreact like yusuke did.
person IceAngel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I only wish I coulda read it sooner. -_- But that's life for you. Anyways wonderful chapter I love it so much. Can't wait for your update bye-ah!

~IceAngel~
person kit-kit
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad yusuke talk to hiei about yukina
person kit-kit
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice i wonder what will happen next
person IceAngel
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey another great chapter! I really like this fic a lot. Really cool. ^_^

It was cute how Hisoka and Tsuzuki caught Yusuke 'n Hiei kissing. I cracked up at that, just pictureing how red their faces musta been. At least Hiei was able to get away, poor Yusuke though.

Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^ I'll be waiting for the next update. Bye-ah

~IceAngel~
person kit-kit
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful i can't wait for the next chapter