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OMG that was hot... I have a proposition for you... SEQUEL! ::Begs:: Pretty please?! I loved this... not only was it hot, but the overall explaination of the emotions flowing through all three was breathtaking... I could totally see Yusuke hitting the floor on hands and knees in desperate need. Amazing absolutely Amazing!

ooo! very very nice! what a case to study, eh? i like. i like a lot!!! i'm a little sad it wasn't continued, but like the three demons, i'm sated. ^_^ very nice job on the smut. you are so wonderful with it!

i loved it. the beginning was especially nice and the ending was great. time sure does fly you're havin' fun. *snickers* anyway, keep up the exceptional work! i look foward to your next fic, whenver that may be. ^__^

~Devious

Mmm, so I’m allowed to proposition you am I? ;-) [Nuzzle nuzzle] I bet you’re very cuddly. The lemon was great and so was the struggle between Yusuke’s human enculturation and his demon instincts. I like how the first paragraph ties into the end of the story where the boys are left wondering about Shiori’s motivations.

^^ i like how it turned out. especially the ending with the note and the food in the microwave. ^_^ that was probably my favorite part, aside from the trust. i love mother's like that. they are so awesome. and they sooo make me want to smile. but yeh. heh.. i think you get that i loved it, as always. ^__^ i swear, someone should give you cookies or something. lol.. so i guess this is something like the next best thing... right? ^^; :D

Ra

Wow! Why didn't I ever get to study anything like that in college?

This threesome is the hottest threesome I've read in a long ass time, woman! Like I told you before, after beta'ing this I went and woke my husband up with a blowjob and then rode him like a cowgirl in heat. And I'm from Ohio, lol. So hot the way you described Yusuke's lust for Kurama and Hiei. I could really feel how horny Yusuke was to the point of painful. Even though I don't have dick, I could really imagine what Yusuke was feeling, the release his body was crying out for. And then how efficiently Kurama and Hiei helped alleviate Yusuke's pain. The raw lust and needy desire was described perfectly.

The case study aspect was spot on with the boy's description of each other, too. What an interesting and creative way to begin an awesomely hot and steamy threesome. Just brilliant. Brilliant seems to be a word that I've been using lately to describe your writing.

And I hold firm to what else I said about this being so hot that if you had been sitting next to me I would have fucked you too, making you scream and scream, writhing with pleasure. Sure I'm a girl, but after reading this, WHO THE FUCK CARES!!!!! lololololol ^_~

Okay, I've said enough and better stop before I get myself into trouble, lol.

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Kogas Hentai Luver

wow hot

Wow...Um, how do I follow KHL's rather fun review? (Her poor husband is probably so tired, and my boyfriend is about to be).

There's just something about your threesomes that make me sweat...alot. I'm glad you changed the verb tenses so everything is past tense. (It was probably easier to fix that whole first part than the following seven pages.) I really liked that Shiori knew - I feel she needs to be portrayed as a strong observant woman, someone I believe Kurama has gotten some of his positive qualities from. I also liked that even though she didn't approve, she just wanted him to be happy.

But, yeah, the threesome...when Kurama flips Yusuke over and Hiei stays "attached" to him, that made my brain all slushy (in a good way), and I'm usually not one for hand jobs (although EMOD likes to argue that they add variety - don't ask, your story spurred the great hand job debate last night), but the entire last scene was just, for lack of a better word - hot...really hot.

And I'm always a sucker for the trust factor. Trust and understanding makes me all romantic and giddy like the fangirl that I am.

You are far too paraniod, I enjoyed this, it was quite good.

Cool! Wait...Two Betas? OMG!

Well...This is a cool fic anyway!