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by PrincessKoriandr

person redroseinadarkalley
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i like this idea! its well thought out and it is not too OOC for kurama... good work
person cillaxox
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I had to come and check this story out. I like it so far. Very well-written.
person The Green Knight
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jeez Kenya! I do believe that you just pwn3d everyone on this site with this story. I mean, I'm NOT just saying this because I love Kurama/Keiko and I like Kuwa-chan here... your writing style is the supreme pawnage. -has assumed the worship position- I think that I shall glue myself to this story. -whips out her super glue-

Eh.... I left out a word. -is embarrassed beyond belief-
person KuwaLove
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! ^^. I truly loved it!! you had everyone in character, even Kuwabara which is a real challenge in it self. ^^. The story line is excellent and I know hasn't been done before, making it orignial in the least! I have nothing negative to say about this. It was some fine piece of work. You could totally consider becoming a writer with your talent ^^. I can't wait to read more of this and I'll pass the word along to some friends I have on this site to give this a try ^^. Kurama/Keiko pairings are rare and it does make sense if you really think about it. So update soon and I can't wait for the next chapter ^^.
person dark_miko90
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this really good you know that? It's going to contain plot and good smut! Very hard to find these days... ANyway, I absolutely adore Kur/Kei so you just have to continue!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha... poor Kurama. Just wait 'til Shizuru gets into this mess...