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by hColleen

person Ryukotsusei
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I can only hope that when I begin my adventures with writing yaoi that I will be even half as good a writer as you are. Keep up the wonderful work!
person kit-kit
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow those lemons were hot.
person Kurama_is_mine
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!! but i felt bad for kurama when Kuroune said he wasnt going to see him anymore!!! but yea i really liked it and was wondering if there is going to be anymore? *hope so your a good writer*
person KyoHana
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure which got me more, um... in the mood (and thus in need of a cold shower) -- the two scenes from Chpater 2 or the ones in Chaper 3!!! All I know is that I LOVED every bit of this and now it's time for me to get upstairs and see if my husband's still awake!! :)

I hope you had a terrific birthday today.... and I'll review any time.... actually, I'll do just about ANYthing for a story... as I'm a story slut!! :)
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Very tasty lemons too. I loved it. Can't wait for more. FYI I use the same name on fanfiction.net.
person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So angsty and heart wrenching. I loved it. And two lemons! You've managed to really balance the needs and desires for both Kuro and Kurama. These two are just too strong and powerful for one to always dominate the other. And you do always manage to put a little twist on the dom/sub roles. Although Youko bottoming is always fun to read, especially when Kuro is in charge. Damn, that was so hot when Youko was calling Kuro names. I think dirty talk is so sexy and arousing, but then again I'm the biggest perv around. You've ended this fic brilliantly is always. I still wish you could have turned this into a little side story for my fic, but oh well. Maybe next time, K. ^_^ I hope you enjoyed your birthday and I'll talk to you soon.
person comicfancat
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow,what a way to find a lover and what a way to be found.Very nice and very good,can't wait for the update
and
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
person KyoHana
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first thing I want to do is wish you the happiest of Birthdays!! The second is to thank you SO much for the wonderful birthday present you so selflessly gave to us!

And finally, I'm in need of a VERY cold shower right now!! The fantasies you wrote for Kurama, as well as the pleasure he gave to himself on both occasions (well, the vines actually gave him pleasure the second time around) had to have been two of the most beautifully erotic scenes I've ever read. They rival Blue Utopiah's in her wonderful 'Island' fic and you should be justifiably proud of what you've written here.

I shall now anxiously await the rest of my 'Lessons'!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I like it especiall the end. Can't wait for the update. Oh yeah, I love the 'review whore' comment. That's me too. Maybe some day I'll post my fics here and not just on ff.net.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo!!!!! I love this. I'm just pissed off that I wasn't the first to review. I didn't even look into this subcategory until today. Damn!!!! I love Kur/Youko fics. And the way you portray them is priceless. The best part about this pairing is when Youko takes a more, maybe not submissive role, but defensive role. Keeping the great Youko Kurama guessing and off guard is rare. I love Kuronue in charge and knowing all the answers. He's so cool. They truly make a wonderful pair.

You brought such humor and wittiness to the dialogue that I enjoyed reading every line. I felt so gripped to Kurama's dilemma of trying to figure out his own mind. You've done a magnificant job here. But then you're an exceptionally brilliant writer. So creative and fresh. It's always a joy to read one off your stories and something I constantly look forward to. I wish I could crank out such great fics as often as you do. I can't wait for the next chapter, even though I already know what happens. I love beta work, ^_^. But its also nice just reading without looking for errors. I'll talk to you later.