rate_review Reviews

This was a great story. I am so glad that you have this adoring fanbase to help encourage you to write more. You do it so well. I plan to become part of said fanbase. I love your work. Cookies and chocolate for the birthday girl - even if it is belated. Ja!

*blink blink* WoW.... I've bnever read a fic with that pairing before, and you certainly aim to please! Loved It! *runs off to read your other fics*

oh, very, very, very nice. i loved every moment of that story. it was such an original beginning, too. lessons learned, i think! i enjoyed the way you had Kurama and Kuro getting to know each other. it was rather cute seeing the fox so flustered. i enjoyed that very much! and the way you had them take each other, like virgins, really. it seemed the same way with the questioning gestures and desire not to cause pain. but it seems Kuro likes pain, that naughty boy! lol! this story was so great. i'm not sure if i enjoyed the actual story more or your exceedingly wonderful lemons. both were just drop dead awesome! i wouldn't mind if this wasn't the end, but i think it was, so great job on it! you are such an amazing author. i'm getting steadily more interested in your works!

that was interesting, and the end was sort of sad - foreshadowing! but anyways, i liked it.

Aw, that last part was so sad, Kuronue realizing that he loved Kurama, but not thinking him capable of the emotion. I wonder if he’d be happy that Kurama joined his soul to a human body and learned to love. Or perhaps Kurama would have disagreed with him, and told Kuro that he already understood the emotion. Mmm, the first scene with them having sex is my favorite lemon from this chapter. I loved the move where Kuronue tucked his feet under him and rolled back so that Kurama was on top ;-). That takes some skill and flexibility and I love positions where the top becomes the bottom, especially where trust issues are involved. Happy Birthday Colleen, I hope it was a good one!

Happy birthday... well, belated here. It's 2:13AM here in NC, so, uh... yeah. Happy Birthday!

"It was almost as if he were hunting for his shadow in a windowless room with no light." I really really liked that line.

Damn....just damn...because of you I now need to invest in clear plastic coating for the keyboard/desk/surrounding area. You really know how to bring home the lemony-goodness. I'm glad that Kurama got Kuronue to beg, but the Kurama-uke lemon, with the sitting in the lap *^&*&%$$^%#$^%....wow, just hot.

I'm glad you addressed just how Kuronue was able to mask his ki and sneak up on Kurama, I was wondering about that. I just love the way you established their relationship, and how Kurama didn't really understand love, but Kuronue did and he acknowledged that that's what he felt for Kurama, and the entire section on him wanting to die first...awesome!

You're incredible, I can't believe that you write so well so quickly...but I'm glad because you're my #1 yaoi supplier!

Happy Belated B-day! (it's almost 6 am here)

this was beautiful, simply beautiful writing at work here. you kinda got me scared for a moment when kuro asked yoko to forget about him. he was, like, 2 inches away from being put on my shit list for hurting the fox. but then you made yoko more than happy again and i totally had to forgive kuro. especially when he gave himself to yoko. i wasn't expecting that to happen, (at least not in this fic, maybe in a sequel) but yoko was pretty damned persuasive with that tongue of his. *snickers* the ending was so sweet, it pretty much turned me into absolute mush. but now, this tired mush puddle would like to sleep. i'm always looking foward to reading your next project. again, happy belated b-day! hope you had a lotta fun and that you'll be able to enjoy many more. keep writing and stay safe! until next time, ja!

“I give you my word. I’ll suck you so hard you’ll remember it until next week, at least.”
“You’re not going that long without sucking me again!”

1 green compostion note book( for keeping track of the great yaoi stories i read online): $1.99
1 Fine black Pilot VBall Grip pen: $2.99
Being able to come home and enjoy great stories with lines like that in them: abso-frickin-lutely priceless

~Devious

Hey,
this story made my day when I found it! Being home sick from school, I was just surfing the web and looking throuh fanfiction, seeing if I recognize to authours, and I see your screen name! So I read it and, by God, I LOVED IT!! I love the pairing. It just works better than most others in my mind. Well, I'm hoping there will be more. There better be more. I love it so much!! Until we speak again!!

Xoxoxo
Alena

heh.. yes. as a matter of fact.. my poor friend DOES have ears. it was an IM. heh.. he didn't call me that time. *snickers.. then grins*

HAPPY ON TIME BIRTHDAY! well. not anymore. its twenty minutes past midnight so it'll say it's monday... xD

ooohh!! the kuro x kura-ness!! *drools* ... and the kura x kuro-ness.. *meltworthy* ... and playful kitsune's in want of a bath? .... *shivers* .. damn .. that's always hot... and those two together.. always render me rather... babble-ish and not too intelligent at thier hot sexiness. oh.. the wonders of awesome authors writing my favorite pairing... heh.. it makes mush of my brain!! ^^; but oh dear ra!! what *enjoyable* mush! ^^ yes.. very much awesomeness. you have a melty-happy Ra on your hands.. unless you want to change the saying... heh..

beautiful, and rather endearing, i think. ^^ heh.. great end, by the way. ^~


Ra