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OMG! Congrats to you! You're the first Kurama/Yusuke writer to not bash Keiko! And OMG the scene where Shuichi was snitching was funny! "Dirty dancing..." bwhahaha! Would you consider another story set after this, only Hiei joins in on the fun?

I like it but it was kinda rushed.. Espcially the last chapter.

Nice, very nicely done...but, who played whom? I liked it a lot. I haven't had a lot of time to read, with all the writing I've been doing, so I'm taking a mini break of sorts to catch up on somethings. This was recomended by BlueUtopia...very nice, very nice indeed.

Very good story. I loved how patiently Kurama wooed Yusuke.

I thought that this was a wonderfully sweet and touching fic. You're a wonderful writer and have beautiful flare with words and emotions. I thoroughly enjoyed myself. Thank you. I only have two suggestions though. Only because you asked ^_^ First, you should really go back to the first chapter and separate your paragraphs. It's really hard to read with the text all smashed together like that. And more importantly, you may scare off potential readers who don't want to strain their eyes. This is such a wonderful story that I would hate to see you loose readers because of somthing so silly and easily remedied. The second, and this is just my own perverted preference. In the first chapter, the lime/lemon was so damn hot and steamy I actually had to take a breath and walk away for a moment ^_^ It was that good! However, once they finally got together in the second chapter, you rushed through the lemon, which was a bit disappointing. I was surprised that you rushed through it considering what a wonderful job you did detailing their first grinding encounter. I was really expecting to see a really long and detailed lemon of them going all the way. But, it's your fic and it still reads wonderfully. But you did ask for suggestions that would make it better. So I decided to stick my two cents in, sorry. Thank you so much for such a great story. Their aren't that many Yus/Kur fics that our worth reading and you've just added to the few that are.!!!!!!!!!

wow me like

I really really like this fic. You paint a wonderful picture with your words, I could easily see Yusuke and Kurama's realtionship growing as they tended to the garden, and you managed to make me snicker quite a bit at all the females ogling them. You have a wonderful grasp on Kurama's character, most present him as being one-sided, and often forget that he is crafty and devious - you did not forget that, and I loved the touches of gold in the kitsune's eyes as well.

And um - yeah - the grinding lemon was beyond hot. You manage to convey an amazing amount of eroticiscm without being vulgar.

And the epilogue - OH MAN, Youko just rules everything.

that was absolutely beautiful work. the first chapter needs to be spaced out so that people can have an easier read and i got confused everytime the little brother was called Shuichi, too. (was that even his name?) but besides that it was a great story. i loved the ending. everything was just about perfect in this fic. i really like these two together and you've really brought the yusuke and kurama pairing to life here. keep up the great work and i look foward to seeing more of this pairing by you.^__^