rate_review Reviews

This was rather interesting. It made me want to do what Shiori thought and bash their skulls together a few times, but I liked it. ^.^ A nice change of pace from other stories.

Really Loved It! I loved it so much I put the frist letter in captails! ^-^ Kinda didn't like the thought that Yusuke was with a women and Yoko with someone else, but it was for making a cute child! Awww he sounded so cute!

Also I loved the part with the fan girls and enjoyed Yoko's mother. She sounds sweet.

Thank you for making this story. (Really thank you. I have been trying to find a good story with these two)

wait...so who played who?

I love this story!!! No matter how many times I read it I can't help smiling at the end!! lol Yuu/Kura are my OTP! And I just love the hint of Hiei/Kuwa - they're my second OTP...

~Duchess

This story was incredibly well written. Excellent plot, great follow through. IT felt natural, like it was inevitable. I thoroughly enjoyed it. That said, you maybe need to reread it more slowly, taking a look at minor missing words that crop up from time to time. In some places you also show a tendency towards Noah's Ark writing, where your adjectives come two-by-two. Clean these up and you'll have a first rate story.

I love your stories. I hope that you can have more of these times of stories or even just sequels . I really love them

After reading ur recent finished story i had to read some of ur other stuff, and of course, I LOVED!

Wow! And I do mean it! This story was great, sexy, and so damn well-written! I just love those two, and you captured their character perfectly! ^_^
*Bows* Very nice job.
*Runs off to see other of your fics*

~Gray Wings

I really liked this story. It was kind of sweet, and a little on the innocent side how their feelings developed. You wrote it very well with lots of good detail and a nice, hot little sex scene. Good job! Now I have to run off and read more of your stuff. Please write more for these two soon.

wow. i officially love this story! this was so awesome! i'm amazed you were able to make this so great in just three chapters! i adored the transformations you had Yusuke and Kurama go through to get their relationship settled. it was so wonderful. even the hurt moments between them when Yusuke gave Kurama the look the fox detested were amazing. i really love this story. and while i don't favor Hiei and Kuwabara as a couple, it didn't hurt the story in the least. i did love your OC as well as the explanation time Yusuke had to face with his other two friends. both were just as wonderful as the story in whole! terrific job! i believe i'm going to read something else by you now. you've got me hooked!