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for I can't make you love me

by chilli

schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This made me a bit depressed, but it was nicely written. I like the way you go about writing something based/inspired by a song. It's much better than how most others attempt to go at it; I really enjoy it. I also love the way you handle Yusuke and Kurame. Hope to read more of your works. :)
person soultornintwo
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool awww so sad no lemon NOT COOL
person RedHedLvr
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice little bite sized bit of angst. I like that in a Yusuke portrayal for some reason. I also like these two as a pair much better than KxH. So, please write more for them soon.

Also a great song. Very emotion filled and I just love her stuff!

Good job.
person LestatsAngel
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey loved it!!! i can't wait untill you do another chapter....please update soon ne?

toodles!!
person nytekit
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a very nice one-shot. though you didn't describe the lemon, the story itself was good. i've read many Kurama runs to Yusuke after Hiei rejects him type stories, but yours is in my top two. i really enjoyed this one. and those lyrics were great. wonderful job!
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O All I can say is this: Wow! It was great and I really loved it. I'm stuck between telling saying you need to add more and leaving it as is because I loved it that much. It was sad how everything went. They all wanted someone they couldn't have. I know what it's like to go through something like that. It really hurts and totally sucks Y_Y. (I didn't sleep with the guy in the end) Ufortunatlely I didn't end up with him either -_-;; ~sigh~

Any way it totally rocked and, weather or not you deside to add more or not, it's going on my recomended reading list.

^__^

Kat
person kit-kit
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow nice but sad it made me want to cry
person alex
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it left me speechless, you know. it has all i needed right now, and the way you pictured kurama's feelings and reactions is just sublime. the more gentle words are, the more they hurt,don't they? you showed that beautifully, and that's what made me love this fic. if inspiration strikes, write some more of this. but it does look perfect as a one-shot as well.
Alex.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyd this. You portrayed the awkwardnness and hoplessness of the situation very well, I ended up feeling bad for both Kurama and Yusuke. Kurama calling out Hiei's name was a real slap in the face, and very unexpected. More! I hope you write more! (and I also want to know more about just HOW flexible Kurama is! - but I have a dirty mind)
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this isn't a oneshot because it has great potential. I love Hiei and Kurama together but in this I think Kurama and Yusuke deserve some happiness.