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Very good. Also very different, but in a good way. It took a while to get to the birth part, but it was worth it because everything was written so well. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

I just ran across this story and I have to say WOW! I'm not usually really fond of the "so-and-so male character is a girl/gets turned into a girl and gets pregnant" since they don't often have a lot of originality, but this is definitely not the case here. You have a believable plot, that is well thought out and very well written, and the characters actually behave like people. They aren't taking everything in stride, they are struggling with the transition and circumstances just as you or I might. And through it all, you're keeping them in character. It's a very intriguing story, and definitely one that I'll be watching for updates. Great Job!

yay you updtaed and this teaser was just that, a teaser. i can't wait to see what happens next. i hope everyone is ready for a fight, knowing yomi he won't take no for an answer, he probably won't even let the words slip from the person's mouth. anyway can't wait to read more so update soon. and keep up the great writing. : )

luved this chapter, luved the names too, especially the one hiei gave. can't wait to read the next chappie

Oh. My. God. I thought you would never update this story, i was beginning to worry. i can't wait to find out their names and how hiei will react to this. also when will yomi make his appearance again, i need to know what he's up to, especially now that the kits are born and shura is leaving with kurama. i just loved this chapter, so plaese hurry and update.

yo, this story is off da hook! i don't know if any else said this but i think you are a genius for coming up with this story. i mean wow. you have to finish it! the idea that kurama's gets turned into a female, then gets pregnant, pure genius. good luck on the next chapter, can't wait to find out what yomi does and what the future holds for kurama's kits.

Loved it! Alot,I think a couple of my favorite parts were how poor Hiei had to wake up and Kurama holding the last kit.Although I really want to know what Yomi has planned and hope that his son isn't unknowingly part of it.Its also nice to see Hiei tring although slowly to accept his now older step son.Though I believe it should be Hiei to stike the killing blow if it is proven other wise.(hope not) Anyway,nicely done and I can't wait for the next update,hope its soon

I wanted to say that I love this chapter and story too

I just finished chapter 17 having just discovered your fic and I must say that I love it!!!!
I will also be looking forward to your next chapter.

That was great. I love babies. Two pretty baby girls and a chibi boy. This would be perfect if you could make them Hiei's instead of that monster that's probably going to rear it's ugly head again. Update soon.