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for Always Tip the Waiter

by Kanan

person nytekit
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice. so now Kuronue's getting a little frisky, eh? i wonder what's in store for this little waiter of theirs. and is it just me, or does the waiter bear a striking resemblence to Kurama? i think he does. and poor Hiei, he just doesn't understand the fox will not take no for an answer. reject him all he wants, he won't go away. that's one of the things i love about this. you have Kurama and his cocky attitude down-packed. i really enjoyed the scene where he was talking to his plants. it seems like something he would do. nice job. update soon!
person Sora
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ I really like this so far, and hiei isnt ooc which is all ways a good thing and you did really well on Kuroune and Yoko Kurama as well. So i hope you update soon because i look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not to be mean..... but when are you updating!!!!!1
person PrinceVegeta's Gurl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a cute story, I like where you're going with this. Please update soon.
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found out that my rev´s are away here too!
Mine are also gone, Cries!
Well I really like it and hope you will ad more chapters here as you did on fn , because I love the humor in this story!
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you did really well with this i am looking foward to reading more
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you updated so soon. I can't wait for more. I hope that you continue to update this quickly. Update soon please.
person CrimsonFox
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel the need to leave this review to let you know how much I liked the first chapter before I review the second since my first review actually got deleted.
person CrimsonFox
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now for a second review... meaning I praise your for the awesome story which I have technically already read quite a bit of on ff.net. I do like the revisions though, gives ya more to think about what might happen next.
person comicfancat
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far,it's a great start to what could be a really good story.Sorry to hear about you losing it on the
other site but thats better for us at this one. :) Can't wait to see where you take it from here,hope you update
soon