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I never really thought about how often I do things on reflex like that until now. Interesting, I'm going to have to see just how often that occurs. Glad that Hiei was able to help him out this time, even if Keiko did get a bit more of a show than she was expecting before she left lol Good chapter, I'm off to read the next one

Thats a damn nice image to picture waking up to let me tell you lol Yusuke begging.. *drools* Another wonderful chapter, can't wait to find out who this mysterious person is and if they are the cause of what happened or know how to help. Update soon please

lol. feed you. of course, midear! now.. if i had a good thesaraus around here.. i would start looking up good words for "brilliant" and "stunning" so you'd get a new one every chapter. LoL. xD but i am SO not going to remember that if or when i DO happen across a good thesaraus. but i must say.. as always, you have me intrigued! i so want to know who the new voice is! ^^ always on the edge of my seat with you.. but that is definately a good thing. and you update WAY faster than i ever could.. so i'm happy whenever you update. besides.. your chapters are... almost exponential in size compared to mine, especially when you consider that yours are usually chaptered.. i give you sooo much love for that.

and now that i've been thouroughly distracted from your LJ.. and left you a review.. i'll go leave you a comment. lol.


Ra

*squee* i love it! ..and people kept talking to me.. but i FINALLY got time to read it! okay. i am so going to have to come up with a more original review for that on the next chapter. xD even if telling you i love it IS true. xD

Ra

I've decided it is time to catch up on my reading and reviewing since I burnt myself out on writing for the moment lol This is a very interesting first chapter. I don't believe I've read any fics where Kurama has gotten amnesia, through any sort of means. I wonder what happened to him. At any rate, I'm off to read the second chapter, keep up the great work!

Man I gotta feel for all three of them at this point. I can't imagine how difficult it would be for any of them with what has happened to Kurama. I have to wonder if this spell just happened to catch him or if it was an attack specifically meant for him and if so why? Hmm perhaps jealousy that Kurama was in this current relationship and the person figured if he/she destroyed his memory they'd have a chance at claiming him. Meh, I'm probably completely off base here but it's fun to ponder. Excellent chapter, I'm off to read the next one.

I liked the way you wrote the Hiei/Kurama lemon. The way Kurama experienced it and how he subconsciously knew what Hiei was going to do fit with the story much better than if it had been written in third-person. I also found the guided meditation interesting. I liked psychologist!Keiko too. I enjoyed all the little details about Kurama's powers( the plants being noisy, how using his powers "tickles") that no one else has ever written about.

And about procedural memory, the saying "practice makes perfect" is very true. I am a slightly clumsy person, but I can and have walked from one end of my house to the other in the dark with out bumping into the furniture. It makes alot of sense that Kurama can find his way around the house and remember where the breakfast things are.

love it!! Poor kurama though not being able to remember anything about hiei or yusuke! hopefully he gets his memory back and hes not in pain aymore!! update soon!!!

So HERE'S YOUR REVIEW *hugs*.

Um - GYAD - the scene between Kurama and Hiei - I read it twice. It was loverly and RAW and I loved it - it was made all that more amazing by it being in the first person/Kurama's POV (I need to try first person at one time or another). But your grasp on psychology and the way it winds through the story makes this more than just your everyday fanfiction. Once you do research, it goes to a higher level. I also LOVE the slow explanation of the trio relationship - I tell you - relationships are ALOT of work and the reason that many say communication is key is BECAUSE IT IS. I can only imagine what having 3 people in a relationship is like!

All around a magnificent chapter - and I am DYING to see what caused Kurama's memory loss and how his memory comes back. And that kinesthetic memory thing - I totally do that - sometimes I don't even realize what I'm doing until I'm halfway through it (but that's only if it's early in the morning or I am preoccupied by something).

Huzzah for hColleen.

wow that lemon came out of left field